What if I was then, then I was now? But if I was now then what happened to then? Think about it, it’s kind of like death. To me death is not a punishment but a way out of life, but torcher is different because you suffer while every body else goes on with life…but hold on that deep. What if life is or was all good, I mean think about it no death, no hate, no hell on earth…that’s deep…very deep. Hold on I’m saying deep and you don’t know what it means do you? Is it the physical meaning of a deep abyss or the earthly meaning of low? Well it can mean whatever you want it to be.
But back to the fact that I am what I am now as to being then of before…think about it. Souls, souls of demons (me) are full of evil and devilish ways as to a human he may be pure and clean until he screws up his life, they must die a slow death, life is not fair…but that deep very deep. Hate, hate is a deep word and the use of it is disorganized opposed to love, love is to easy and to hard to cope with…but that’s deep. Why is love so tough, maybe because it takes two to love and one to like…but that’s deep.
Life is a given too easily taken for nothing, but when one’s life is taken away then it’s a tragedy…but that’s deep. But if one’s soul is lost in the midst of shadows then they must die.. but that’s deep. Shadows, shadows of death, blood drips from the tip of your finger, is it murder, or death..but that’s deep. Check this, if one dies and one lives but the one who dies is living before the one who lives but the one who lives is dead…that to deep for you right now. What if you killed a loved one, but if your dead how did you kill another human…that’s deep. Eternal darkness, a place of torment and torcher, darkness relms in this abyss of faulty souls that lived a pure but dirty life…that’s deep. Colors, there everywhere in this world, blue is the color of a dark knight that will rise once a day twice in a millennium, red is the color of blood from fallen humans that took the wrong path, the path of…that’s deep. Now black, my favorite is the color of an impure soul, dark and evilness arises from this color, shadows are black and mysterious…but that’s deep. Fire is also a color, it symbolizes hell and burning and pain…but that’s deep. Fire is burning, burning human flesh, your human flesh, now you lay in ashes of your own ancestors…now their coming for you…your time is limited…the only way to stop them is to stop yourself…figure it out because your deep enough…hells demons are coming and it’s to late…now your too deep.
it's crazy
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im loving it!!!
i didnt know u had it in u to write such a deep and touching story i think that the voice was incredible!!!keep it up cuz i would love to read some moer

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 1.

