Death is fast
It’s never resting
It’s always fate, snatching away your destiny
It wasn’t your time to go Chris
No one was prepared to loose you
No one wanted to say goodbye
It’s very hard to believe how a fearless soul like yours can be taken away so quickly.
Your death was tragic
A wound that can never be mend
It took away our happiness and replaced it with pain and heartbreaks
I still remember the last time I saw you
The last smile and the last look on your face
It was promising, that look had hope for the future
A charming soul you were and will always be
You had so much courage and willness for tomorrow
That even death cannot erase
Black, white Asians
To all you were a ture friend a brother and a son
I’m in everyway very grateful to have known someone as sparkling as you were. We’ll always have that empty space within us that only you can fill. We’ll miss every memories and time spent with you and forever you’ll be a part of our lives. My life.
Please tell me what you think
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This was encouraging and well written.
I like your use of words and how you described something in general.
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This was pretty good. I liked it personally, a lot of emotion put into it and the way it was written seems genuine like. I hope that sounds ok... Nice job on this.
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i liked this. I could image it. but is this a true story or false? Also why did you say black, white asians in the middle of it? I made no sence to me.
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thanks
this is a true story by the way. i lost a friend in a car accident four months ago due to racing.
thanks for your comment though -
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oh so sad...
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