Legends . . . It’s kind of funny. People who are legends, have countless fans.
They are feared by the corrupt, and they there is never much known about them.
Yet once you learn about these people, you come to realize they are just like
everyone else. These people are the same as you and me. The only difference is
that these persons stood up during a crisis when no one else would. They are
the only ones brave enough to truly risk their lives for something they believed
in.
Some legends are small, some are big; but one thing is for sure. Just like
everything else, once these brave souls are no longer needed, their stories
fade. When fear, and death no longer linger in peoples lives, they forget about
those who protected them. The natural super heros of the world dissolve into
nothing more then myths. Bed time stories told to children at night.
For those world wide, however, crisis shall strike again. No one will be safe.
The time is quickly approaching when a new legend will be born. But will this
legend die away like the rest?
Author notes
This isn't even the first chapter. This is just the introduction to my story. Still I find it to be very important, so I would really appreciate some good critiques.
Give me something, anything, but don't just say it sucked or it was awesome.
Comments
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I haven't read any of your writing other than poetry in a while, but I definently see great improvement. I think this is a good introduction to your story (knowing it already). It's very interesting.
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I think it sounds great. I can't wait for chapter one!
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