NejiTen poem[This is emo.. D:]

You never thought a girl could be strong,

With this girl you were wrong.

You thought she was just another Teamate.

But she thought of you as more,

Though you just took her heart and tore.

Your eyes are supose to see though anything,

But why couldn't they see she's not a weakling?

She barely clinging,

on to her own life.

Hell! She's already holding the knife.

She cuts her wrist,

Still trying to resist,

The fact that she thinks you hate her.

You finally come in,

Realising what you had din. (In place of done, cause it sounds cooler)

It's to late,

She's already filled with hate.

She already cut her skin,

As blood starts pouring from within.

You tell her you love her.

But when she finally realises her mistake.

It's already to late.

Her weapon still deep,

Her eyes full of weep.

You tried to mend,

The pain but it was already the end.

She drops, Lies, Falls, and Lies.

And soon she dies.

~But she loves you,

and she died knowning you loved her to.

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This is a random roleplay reply, that has to do with NejITen, so I am going to put it.

=D

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"Death is not always a bad thing.." Her eyes dazed over, before speaking once more.."Personally I never really thought anyone would care if I died...I mean I use to think Kankurou would but then that whole Ino thing..." She said, pausing between each statement. "And then I thought one other person would, but half the time it seems all he can feel is Hate, Annoyance, or just be content..." Her pauses, became a bit more noticable with each fragment of speach. "Still, for some reason I love him. More then I ever loved anyone even Kankurou...I mean whenever her smiles, which is rare it makes my heart skip a beat..." She said, her voice softening not even one thought about what she was saying. "And every time it gets truly bad, he is there. And Kankurou isn't. I guess maybe he would care, but even so In the end when someone dies. It takes no more then three days, and then no one cares anymore. Years from when they die, no one even remembers...It's a sad fate..." She said, finally getting to that Hinata tone.

( Dx Emo TenTen roleplay.. SHe is talking to Neji. Kankurou got married to Ino... Neji got pissed at her for huggging Kankurou so she went emo. Very complex..)

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  • nejixtenten
    September 12, 2007
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    how sad


  • Sinned Alchemist
    May 28, 2007
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    Sad.
    ~cries~


  • Chibi-chan
    May 28, 2007
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    AYa: GAAH! Emoness NOT GOOD!
    Chibi: like you're one to talk...
    Aya: can you see ME cutting?!!?
    CHibi: Yeah- you're sawing at your wrists with a kunai and breaking the blade.
    Aya: Cause I'm a Juunishi?
    Chibi: dead on. *laughs at mental image of Aya trying to cut and screaming "It's not coming out!!" O_____o* lol

    • Sinned Alchemist
      May 28, 2007
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      Oh wow.I 'member when Gaara told me that he tried cutting himself and something like that happening.

      Kristina: Why did I create you Krystal?

      Krystal: 'Cause you wanted to?

      Kris: WRONG!


    • SpringtimeofYouth
      May 28, 2007
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      Reku; xD Aya can't cut herself..
      TenTen; -dead- x_x
      Hornet; ._. Wow..

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