I don't know you.
And I don't know you.
So why do you hurt me?
Every time you hit me, I briuse.
Every time you yell at me,I cry.
Every time you touch me I burn.
Every hand you raise to me causes me to cringe.
Why can you see?
Do you want to see?
Do you care?
Why do you get pleasure from my pain?
Why must you try to give me pleasure after the pain?
Your voice kills me slowly,echoing in the still of mind,driving me insane.
Your face haunts me in my nightmare,banishing my plesant dreams.
Your texture makes my flesh crawl,making me wish my skin was not my own.
Everything about you destroyes my sanity,my peace.
Leaving me with scars.
Please tell me what you think
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awww, that was so nice......its very gud....i love it alot!!!
happy writing and gud luk!!!
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This has a sad story you are trying to tell behind it. I liked reading this, though, you had put a great amount of emotion in this and reality. I also liked how you described it all...the last lines were my favorite, especially "Everything about you destroys my sanity, my peace." It was a great and sad poem...good job!!
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