Ice sentence vs Fire sentence


First of a ice and fire

Ice to break and ice to feel

Fire to burn fire to cook

Icing power

Fire power

Nothing more or nothing less 1


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to get to iceland or fireland3


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Fire dosen't melt 5


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but ice does melt 7


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Ice dosen't burn 9


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but fire does11


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The heart of 2 things can be real.
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  • Freedom-Spirit silver member
    November 14, 2007
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    Nice back ground1 I like it very much it was cool you had your heart in this it didn't seem that you did it to win but to well to I dont no
    -Nice back ground
    -fffffffffff
    -ttttttttt-hf
    A G T
    So my ishinal are A G T
    ok now dance ok now dance
    sorry
    A G T

  • Freedom-Spirit silver member
    November 4, 2007

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    Nice

    Nice back ground1 I like it very much it was cool you had your heart in this it didn't seem that you did it to win but to well to I dont no
    -Nice back ground
    -fffffffffff
    -ttttttttt-hf
    A G T


  • Frozen Fire Poet
    May 26, 2007

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    Please fix the little little mistake here. At the second to last line i think it should be fire because it doesn't make any sence.Anyways i liked this. It was well writen.