There once was a beautiful girl named Marianela. There was one problem... When she was 12, she was in a terrible car accident. This accident left her in a hunchback form. Her face looked like a woman's but her body like a liitle kid's. Since her parents both died in the accident, she had to stay at a neighbors house. She guided the man of the house, Philip Costos, raound because he was blind but one day he died...
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sorry but i'm not done yet
Please tell me what you think
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this is really depressing but i wonder how it ends? there r so many things that could happen. It looks like a really good story though!
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sad! what happens to Marianela?! I wannna know! update soon!
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Awesome! You should make it longer
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Aww, that's sad.
You gotta write more!!!
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i'll try
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Coolness. XD
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Aww... I really want to know what happenens.. but this is more of a summary than a story. But you can take ur time.
~Adelinaaaaaaa~
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lol i want more u have a whole story to translate sister lol
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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awesome
way cool in english continue writing!!! luvrzbeginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Very good so far! I look forward to seeing how her life continues on. Keep it up and never stop writing.
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I can see ur not finished. good start tho. And its much easier to read in english. lol
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