Toy R.C

One morning my sister Naila and I headed way to Rite Aid to pick up some supplies. I then wondered off to the toy section to check out what new toys they had in stock. At once this toy caught my eye like a beautiful woman walking down the street. This toy was a Ferrari R.C racecar. This car was as beautiful as Tyra Banks and shiny as 50 cent’s watch. After checking out the outsets of the car I looked for the price of the car. The price was just as great as the car was. For the car it only cost twenty dollars, right away I knew was a bargain especially for a car of such great quality. I knew that if I didn’t get this car soon someone else would and there was only one more left. So you know I did what anyone else would do I took the car and hid it among the other toys to make sure no one else could see it and get tempted to buy it.

That afternoon when we got home from shopping the first thing I did was run and tell my mom about the car at the store and how much it cost. I was as happy as someone who won the lottery once she answered me yes. Her words to me were yes son since you are doing well in school right now so you deserve a reward, we’ll get the car tomorrow. Then I thought to myself if doing well in school could get me this I should do well more often.

The next day we went back to Rite Aid to pick up the car. When we got home I played with my new car till the batteries died out.

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  • Zakerack
    June 5, 2007

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    deem this story is flat out GAY lol jm it was cool i guess it wasnt that exciting tho , thats becuase it wasnt about anything that cuaght my interest o well good luck on further story writing


  • bossy
    May 31, 2007

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    Good thing you got your car but the story was great and i think that you should writee some more stories because i will love to read some more.

  • deem
    May 30, 2007
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    great story deem


  • Jadaaa
    May 25, 2007

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    LOL!

    Kadeem this story was really good! im glad you got your car! I love your use of metaphors! Great job! =]