Ice, steaming in frost
Sometimes I wonder
The face that is glossed
Will ever melt and defrost
Ice, chilling in gelidity
Cold as if dead
Fighting warmth in hostility
Still holding fragility
Ice, sometimes I wonder
Why is it so cold?
In chills I plunder
Dying to know whats deep and under
Ice, is obscure
But water lives within
Whats makes it endure
Its long melting tour
Ice, many secrets it holds
How it manages to box water
And it only unfolds
When heat comes and molds
Ice, with ears
Stands to swing and see
Icicles from tears
Standing in frost while heat spears
Ice, so cold
So stiff and arctic
Icicles like diamonds and gold
The waters inside in ice do fold
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ON: Sunday, May 20, 2007
AT: 12:51:41 AM
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Author notes
a poem for my dear friend mary especially dedicated to "Frozen Fire Poet"yayness
A contest entry
- The Easy Fire and Ice by Frozen Fire Poet.
240 points, ended May 30, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This flows wonderfully, Great Job. There's not a single thing I would change.
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Good poem
I like the double meaning. The physical ice and iciness of a persons exterior persona.
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Very nicely written. Great flow and descriptions.
Haha reading this makes me more cold.
Very nicely done.
Great job. Keep up the great work.
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thanksssssssss emm thanks alotssssssssssss
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this is cool. ha. no pun intended. i liked this, because if you really pay attention when u read, it makes sense, but if u don't, ur lost! good work!
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thanks for da comments alots
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this was very good i love all your work great job this was well written like all your other work well done to you great job and god bless
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