ice and fire

Fire, ice, ice, fire,

fire, crackiling, like music,

ice is smooth, beautiful

fire, buring the ice down,

ice, freeze the fire, if it has a chance

as the music of the crackiling fire

goes so well with the gliding ice,

ice, fire, fire, ice

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  • Frozen Fire Poet
    May 19, 2007

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    Kewl

    That was sure short. Can you add a little more please??? Can you add a backround??? Athough this was kool