Ice Queen vs Fire king

Iden grabbed her ice torch and got into her carrage. Today was the day that she would defeat the Lord of Flame. She had a stradegy that only ice could have for when Ice was quickly intermixed with fire after the fire was shot then it would turn hard and brown. Only Iden of course new that at least that is what she thought.

Meanwhile Dray the Fire lord was in his palace making plans to ruin the Ice queen. He remembered not so long ago when they were in their youth that everyone always talked about them in a pair. It was always Iden and Dray did this or if Iden and Dray got married what would the baby be fire or Ice? Or would it be a mix? The fact was though that things were different now. He couldn't just go up to her after five years of hatred and say he loved her! That just wasn't how thing worked here in the land of Fire

The fact was that each of them were on a mission a mission to destroy each other so that their half of the island could take over the whole Island as either fire or ice. Not both. That just wouldn't do for the land of Frice and both of them knew that.

Iden and Dray met scowling at each other as they begrudgingly shook hands. Half of the areana rooted for the Fire King while half rooted for the Ice Queen.

They began their battle of life and death with the Fire King throwing the first punch. He threw a wave of flame at her. She chuckled as she pushed it back at him with a wall of ice. This counterattack caused him to be engulfed in the fire first then stuck in the mold that had become of it. Only Dray's head was barely unstuck.

As she was about to finnish him of he pleaded, " Please, don't you remember when we were kids?" she answered him with a cold icy no and went on. He tried again, " please!" again she anwered no. He was down to his last resort.....and that was love. " please I love you Iden and I have throughout this whole time," What he said worked because she released him.

Then the couple announced that the new island would be called Frice to complement Ice and Fire all at the same time. Then it so happened that they lived Happily ever after....and the land of Frice did too.

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  • Blurith
    May 30, 2007
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    This was a good read. Congrats on the silver!


  • Sunless Spirit
    May 30, 2007
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    sorry bout the laughing its cause it changed from sobs to laughs ITS CHANGES


  • Sunless Spirit
    May 30, 2007
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  • Sunless Spirit
    May 30, 2007
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    oh.....


  • Peaceloveandbeatles
    May 19, 2007
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    Actually I got the idea for this story from your picture...it inspired me

  • darknights
    May 19, 2007
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    it was very amazing! i loved it!

    beginning: 2, language: 1, plot: 3, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 5.


  • Frozen Fire Poet
    May 18, 2007
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    Good Rules Followed.

    The rules were followed exactly and completely! How old are you?? This was great and perfect but needs some fixing.

  • Frozen Fire Poet
    May 18, 2007

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    This was Lovely

    Some of it was a bit cofusing. Although you may edit and I will not remove from contest no matter what! I am nice like that! Good job!

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