one day,
i was willing to play with a couple of buddies
who were a few times mean to me.
i was doing that for a while until i asked them:
"hey, do you know where your dad went?"
"No, why?!"
"well, he is going to New York", i said
the younger boy's (there are two) eyes
got big and he was shocked, like what in the world
kind of thing.
next thing you know, my playmates and their dad
were out of the picture.
it was only myself, my dad and my mamma that were left.
my dad said it would be better to move to NY
because it'd be warmer and there would be more sunshine.
now, that night, my daddy and i got on the go
and drove for a little while until it got real late
and we found a hotel to sleep in.
we went inside and talked to the people
for some amount of time.
then, the owner of the hotel took us upstairs
and showed us the lofts, they were odd looking...
they had curtains that you would roll over at night
and that was your room similar to how doctors do it.
it was one big huge room and then small privacy
drapes, you would pull over to be your temp house.
until it was time to close them, everyone made a mess
including us.
we brought our sleep-gear and our beds were so big
that they allowed us to use
two of these 'apartments' (one on each side of the building)
for tonight.
we slept 'till morning and got up out of our corn cots.
[warning: this is the scary part next]
somehow, i popped back in Colorado {where we originally were}
by myself to get my mamma and we started marching along
after that. it was weird (odd) how we didn't need a map
until we were all the way up in the canyons of New York.
when in New York, my mamma and i walked on the high
mountains of wherever we were at.
as far as i can remember, we went up a ways into the
beautiful hills and mounts. and, then, the sun
looked big and unreal almost so much that my mamma thought
it was real warm and layed down on a rock just as she did
in Colorado on the sand pile.
i left her there for a few minutes and hiked up the rigid
cliff until i reached near the top and called my mamma
to come up and not scrape herself so i could be
supervised.
she came with me and we held hands going through these
rocky fields.
dad must've been right, it's wonderful like summer up here.
mamma and i found a place where no one was living at
and hoped it'd be ok so stayed there for a couple hours
(not a flow of real life, lol).
we walked out to the balcony but didn't realize it was a
dock 'till later. i saw water rolling in and thought it
was the ocean and was very scared that i might go in.
hmmm, we got bored so tried to run out there quickly
to the other side of the canyon trail. ha, it was only
2 feet deep, so i walked slower on the way back because
it was dark over there.
both of us were now lost and i asked my mamma if i could
call my dad or not. she said yes, however, i had second
scary thoughts because i knew today was the day our
phone number was changing, and i didn't know if i'd be able
to reach him. at that point, i immediately reacted,
"oh my, we're departed."
i tried the old phone number anyway, and it worked!
i said, "i'm lost and i'm trying to get to New York."
he answered, "well, who are you?" "I'm Daisy, your
daughter!" then, he said: "Oh, oh, well let me come over...
where are you?" I said, "well, mamma and i are in the warm
canyons right now and lost."
took him a little while to come over, but dad found us
and said that we should go over to the middle / city
to get to where we want. I curiously said "how far away
from New York?" ... "4 miles"
strangely, my mamma stayed in the paradise-like canyon
and i went to New York City with my dad and the minute
i got there, oh, how sad i felt. it was dark and cool
...
not very fun.
Author notes
yes, lol
i entered the dream i had when i was sleeping the other day. It is real.
hope you like it. i'm also a ten year old youngster.
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Kewl
Kewl is all I have to say friend. It was not fun? Aww.
Sorry! I hope you have fun next contest and good luck

