When I die, it will be Easter time.
The sky will be a cloudless, open dome
Magnolia will blossom in the park
With daffodils that mutely call, "Come home!"
I'll leap into the water to see Jesus,
And I'll smell breakfast cooking on the shore
And I'll hear shouting, crying, laughing, singing
And Aslan's roar.
Author notes
The contest said either a happy or a sad poem. Maybe I've cheated, since this one is both! Confusing references to water, Jesus and breakfast are taken from a Bible story which I'll tell you if you don't recognise it.
A contest entry
- Give it to me A good old poem...lol by jtnbuck.
200 points, ended May 17, 2007, 15 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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thisis unique..lol..i don't quite have the day i die..quite planned out...but i like the way its written..good job!
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ya this was good thank you for putting it in my cvontest keep up the great work this was really good great job and well done god bless and good luck in my contest
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