Bunny Bunny
Hop Hop
Bunny Bunny
Stop Stop
You'll crash into a wall
That's strong and mean and tall
Bunny Bunny
You're going too fast
Bunny Bunny
How long will you last?
My dear sweet bunny,
The blue skies are sunny
You hopped onto the street
Careful you'll become dead meat!
Splat!
I told you not to go,
Why did you do that?
Now without you everything in my eyes are gray
Oh bunny bunny, there's nothing left to say
But as I walk, I come across another bunny
Sweet and smart, AND TOTALLY FUNNY!!!
Author notes
XD. I got bored and the topic was "Funny" or "Sad." Now, I've written many sad poems before...MANY. But I thought I'd go with funny this time ^__^
And also, since I can't write about love ((what a drag --;; I ALWAYS write about love)) I thought I'd write about bunnies.
INSPIRED BY MEI YUET LAM!! One of the coolest people I'll ever meet ^__^
A contest entry
- Give it to me A good old poem...lol by jtnbuck.
200 points, ended May 17, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
lolz. Say whatever you want.
Comments
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Eeeei poor bunny
I heart bunnies very muchly 
Great job lol
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XD Thank you very much ^_^
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besides just saying this is all good and all I LOVE IT! I LOVE THIS POEM!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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lol! funny as crap! XD
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I liked this alot.
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interesting
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OMEEGOSH!I HEART BUNNIES!!!!!!
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yah me too =D
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omg this was really cute and funny poor bunny lol this was great i liked it good job on this and good luck in my contest good job again
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Thank you Eva ^___^
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