Assignment 2---prologue1
Life is dependant on love life for any individual.'Love and live live'-I strongly feel! is decided by destiny and it happens at the first sight. Love stays stale when not communicated, but it is ever green in the minds.Love can only be nurtured, but cannot be manipulated.2
Mohan, an engineer is attracted by his colleague Nalini and falls in love.Nalini and Mohan are working in an Engineering concern dealing with real estates. , by name, "Heavenly Home "constructions(P) ltd.Nalini is an executive in the drawing department . Mohan knew her for nearly two years and she is very sociable and moves with Mohan very friendly. Mohan also takes her opinion on different matters of construction. They meet at restaurants ,parks,and sea shore.Both of them loved each other ,but kept the idea in their mind.Their dreams were not expressedopenly. His love towards her is increasing latently by passage of time.But he dilly dallies to communicate about his love to her. she is also in love and lacks courage to express herself, as she feels he may not receive it properly.But they move very close .Nalini's parents fix her marriage with Mr. Prabhu, an executive in a bank.Nalini resists the move but succumbs.Mohan comes to know about this and rushes to her and declares his love to her and wants her to Marry him. As Nalini expresses her helplessness, Mohan blesses them attending the marriage. But he is unable to forget her and postpones his marriage indefinitely. 3
Mridula, a medico, who resides by the side of Mohan's house tries hard to attract the attention of Mr.mohan and loves him deeply. But Mohan never had any thoughts about her.On and often Mridula used to come to Mohan's house and tries to involve Mohan in friendly conversation. She proposes visiting a cinema theatre together or going for a picnic in a garden etc. But Mohan used to reject politely.4
Nalini's husband doubts the closeness of Mohan and Nalini in official activities.He teases her doubting her chastity.After so many twists and turns in the story, Nalini marries Mohan divorcing Prabhu.5
True love never dies but grows to reach the unforeseen heights in fulfilment of the wish of the two craving souls in love at the end!6
Author notes
True love never dies but grows to reach the unforeseen heights in fulfilment of the wish of the two craving souls in love at the end!
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This has started off beautifully. I love, love stories. Will continue to the next. Thanks for the share.
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true love and a wonderful story
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This is very heartwarming! The story reads with pure hope,love, and joy! You are a true romantic story teller. Two craving souls, could not tell how high their love could take them. Novy
beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Are you going to write more of this story ceegeeess? it has the makings of a beautiful love story. I will look forward to reading more of your work my friend~angelica
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AHHH Shankar,this will be very beautiful story, I shall enjoy reading it.Sally
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Shankar, Look forward to reading more of your story when you post it my friend~Love~angelica~
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I like your plot, too. Just got the feeling that a little too much is revealed in the introduction. It seems a bit like the summary. But the story is interesting. I look forward to reading as you build more on it.
Best wishes,
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This is a good story. I also find you could have explored it more, made it longer and with more details. Maybe with a second chapter if you think it would be too long to read at once. Anyway, you did it well, and I surely would like to read more about Nalini and Mohan
Loves,
Mari
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I like this, although I feel you gave a little too much away and this could have been longer if you filled it with more suspense. This is a good overall plot. Well done!
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