It's a sufferance
Unbearable
Intolerance
Neligible
I'm negligent
So what?
You're ignorant
I've forgiven you
and still you stab
with a jagged word
Cut into me
Is that all you've heard?
I forgave you
But you made the mistake
to ignore me again
Well, I'm off again
and there'll be no coming back
no weeping reunion
just the bitter hurt
I know
I mispoke
I know
you misunderstand
I'm sorry it had to end this way
I really didn't want to have to apologize again
But this is exactly how it'll end.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Fast
This is fast! Fast fast and confused?
I diddn`t get it. Although somehow it seemed good?? I dunno on this story or poem or whatever. Did it rhyme? Ahh okay?
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I feel like I've been drawn into this problem of being attacked and sort of like, dissed. This poem does a really good job of telling a story within a story. It's a bit confusing yes but I know that it's something easier to do that to describe. I hope you'll write more about this subject, I really enjoyed reading it. Haha, I feel like we're in an argument from reading this story, me attacking you and you attacking back. It's kind of odd. ~ZeroKiryu. Message if you need any help.
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