From the time my splitting head forced me awake i starting to guess it was another really screwed up night.There was blood dryed around my mouth and broken nose.my eyes were dryed shut with some shit.i felt like my face was smashed in by a ballbat or brick.when i was able to open my mouth i had to spit out some teeth.there was just a sliver of lite coming in one eye.it hurt to try to think.What the hell happened? Lets see i was going out to enjoy my birthday .On the way to the club some punks starting messing with my girl. There were 5 of those shits all were holding some type of weapon. I kicked the shit out of the one with his hands on my girl.then there were shots fired. my girl was falling to the pavement . one dude grabed her purse.the next shot caught me in the gut then they stomped us,kicked us raped her after she was dead. They laughed as they ran away.my girl was dead. HAPPY FREAKING BIRTHDAY.
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