i got to the house around 11:15. it had been a long day. i was ready for a 1ittle relaxation, and thankfully i didnt have to get up too early the next morning. i had been planning it out the whole way home. i had to take care of the dogs first. food and medicine and treats. then i went to the bedroom. got myself settled in the bedroom. stripped off the jeans i had been wearing all day.
i decided that a late night swim might be just the thing i needed to calm my nerves and let some tension go. it's only me. so i let my hair down from the bun it was in. remove my panties. and my bra. i put on some pajama pants and go out on the patio. letting the dogs follow me. at first i sit on the edge of the pool and just sit with my feet on the first step. the dogs all come over the be near me. and i just breathe for a moment. taking in the stillness of the night.
the water is nice. splashing against my ankles. warm waves of water. the sensuality of it, made me want to work my way in. i stripped off the pants and shirt and let myself be pulled into the weightless feeling of water. letting the water caress my skin. i just stood near the edge of the pool. the dogs following me where i went. i could see the night sky above. and the nearby trees made it almost like being at my grandmother's cabin on the lake.
i had my dugout and my bat. i smoked a little. just a little. then i did a few laps across the pool. feeling the water flowing over my body as i swam down to one end and back. i smoked a little more then did some more laps. the dogs following me from one end to the other. trying to kiss my face at each end. after a while i just let myself float around the pool. feel the bouyant feeling of being in water. like weight has been lifted off of you.
you walk through the glass doors, a towel wrapped around you. you bare feet feeling the stone beneath them. finding their way to the cooling comforting water. you step into the water, and drop your towel on the side of the pool. you walk down the stairs until the water is at your waist. lapping at your hips, your curves, your bare skin. you dive in to the water, resurfacing at the other end where i am standing. still admiring the beauty of your body slicing through water.
as you surface and find your footing, raising yourself up to your full height, you grab my hips and gently pull me towards you. your lips find mine, and we exchange a long but gentle kiss. rediscovering the feeling of your lips, the taste of your mouth, the sweet flick of your tongue. gently nibbling at your lower lip. pressing harder into you. i feel your body wrapping around mine. we are half floating, half standing. you kiss my neck, my ears, my collar. with each touch a small tremble races through my body. your hands trace the lines of my body. my hips, my stomach, my shoulders, my back. you pull me closer. kiss me harder. our tongues now tangle, reaching, flicking, twisting, playing. i can feel your breathing become more rushed, matching my own.
in the weightlessness of the water it is easy for you to lift me. using your body you back me into the nearest pool wall. you begin at my neck, just behind my ear and work your way down my neck. your hands exploring, grabbing, playing. you kisses line my collar bone. your hands cup my breasts perfectly. as you kiss my mouth. hard. breathing heavy now. a low moan slips past my lips and my body heaves up towards you. playfully you tug at my nipples, enjoying the short gasps that escape each time. i wrap my legs around you and pull you closer to me. you begin to kiss my chest. holding onto my hips. licking your way down to my hard nipples. your arms wrapped around me. pulling me into you. you take my tit into your mouth swirling you tongue around the hard protrusion. my body is beginning to melt. lifting up to get closer to you. your hands on my back. you suck and lick and pull and bite. each time drawing out a slightly higher moan from between my lips.
suddenly you break off. you run your nails gently down my back then release me. you slowly turn and make your way out of the pool. your body silhoutted in the light coming through the patio doors. you grab your towel and walk inside. pausing breifly at the door indicating that i am to follow.
i float momentarily in the water, between that relaxing feeling of the evening and the intense feeling of desire. then i, too, climb out of the pool. wrap myself in my towel and follow you into the house.
i expect you to be waiting when i get to the bedroom, but you are not there. i dry off and lay down on the bed. covered in blankets and pillows. it is like a small bit of heaven on my skin. my impatience, my longing, makes the time between then and when you return seem interminible. but you do return.
you immediately climb on top of me on the bed. straddling me. you kiss me hard again. i can feel my pussy getting wet again. and i can feel yours pressed against my leg. i can feel you want me as badly as i want you. i reach up to meet your lips with mine. i want to pull you down on top of me. feel the entire length of you along the entire length of me. your skin, your lips, your hair, your body. i want it all at once. and you oblige. letting your body stretch to it's full length along mine. our legs tangled and twisted as we try to touch as much skin to skin. the electricity passing between us is incredible and our bodies begin to rock in sync. your leg pressed between mine, and mine between yours. i can feel you getting wetter. and i am sure you can feel me. i revel in the simplicity of two bodies intertwined, and how that can create such electricity, such desire.
your hands are moving all along my skin now. as you kiss me in every place you can think of. from my eyes and my face to my neck and my collar. my sides. my stomach. my chest. my breasts. your hands sliding over hips, pausing in valleys. defining the lines where hips meet waist, where leg meets body, where touch slips into ecstasy. i feel your fingers dance along my legs, the inside of my thighs, then gently brush between my legs. a smile slips across your face as you feel the smoothness along my freshly shaved pussy.
you are such a tease as you let your fingers run along my slit. my pussy aches waiting for you to slip them in.
you continue to tease, positioning your leg so that i can feel the gentle force between my legs. my hips rise up to meet you. wanting to pull in your hand. wanting satisfaction. you take my tit full into your mouth. circling my nipple with your tongue. you bring me close to the edge. until i cannot bare it anymore. until my clit is throbbing in anticipation. just when i think i can take no more teasing you flip me over
you push me up onto all fours with your knee between my legs. i feel you body behind me. i can feel your wet pussy press into my ass as you lean over and whisper in my ear. "What do you want?" you ask.
"You." is all that slips out between sharp breathes of anticipation.
I can feel your fingers sliding up and down the line of my pussy. You grab my tit in your hand and squeeze, pulling a bit at my nipple. My breathing quickens, and i feel my cunt getting more wet. i need to feel you inside of me.
"What do you want?" you ask again.
"You." again, is all I can force out. my pussy aches and my clit throbs wanting you.
"What do you really want?" you ask.
I can take no more. "I want you to fuck me." i gasp as you slide two fingers into my pussy from behind.
i feel you slide them in and out. leaning back into your hand with each thrust. slowly at first. deep pentrating strokes. i am at your mercy already.
your pace quickens as my body rides your hand faster and faster. my muscles tighten as you slip in and out. you rise up on your knees above me. your are my master in that moment. my body is yours to do what you wish. i am your dirty little slut. i want you to fuck me.
and i can feel that you want me. you want to be my master in that moment. you want to fuck me. to make me cum.
i feel your nails down my back as i ride your hand, and it makes me gasp again. i cant help but vocalize my pleasure. you slap my ass hard, the run your soft hand over it. my body now writhes as you pump your fingers in and out of my dripping pussy.
you reach around and find my clit. hard and throbbing. you circle it with the tips of your fingers. i have all i can do to stay on as i ride your touch into ecstasy. as i push back you push yourself into me, and i feel your own wet pussy. i feel your desire. and it makes my body shudder.
i am beyond turning back. my body is racked with pleasure as waves of orgasm wash over me. once. twice. three times. until i am exhausted and can take no more. you fall down over me. wrap your arm around my waist and slowly slip your fingers from my quivering body. almost as one body we collapse onto the bed. breathing heavy, as hearts calm. i feel your body on top of me. your breasts pressed into my back. and your face on my shoulder.
for a moment we just lay there, breathing as one.
A contest entry
- Out of the Closet by Kevan.
375 points, ended May 20, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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beautiful, you used alot of really interesting erotica techniques, and used them well.
I like the way you built into the scene instead of just jumping right into sex, I like that you didn't make it typical, but still followed the erotic plot. I don't see that very often. I like how you didn't really establish too much about the charecters' looks, in some stories that would be a problem, but here I think it really contributes. It gives just enough that the reader can form a good picture in their head, but not so much that it would only appeal to a select few.
Nice work

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This was very good. I enjoyed it and to me personally it held my attention...the last sentence leaves one to really imagine the scene and feeling the heat.
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interesting. rather intriguing. kept me hooked the whole ay through. keep up the good work
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I kind of like your writing style. The lack of capitalization is actually interesting here. The story itself is very well done. This is a good descriptive scene and I thought you captured the desire and emotion of the characters quite well. Excellent work!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, characters: 5.
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Your story failed to draw me in. And do not take me wrong, I enjoy reading erotica. But this one was as cliched as it gets, and the many spelling errors and lack of capitalization just pulled me further away. You should try to revise this quite a bit. It doesn't suck, so don't say I said that. It's barely good, though. Just barely.
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okay....
i reread it. still turns me on. i'll work on the capitalization, but as you can tell it's almost ingrained in my writing style.
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Cliche
I don't know if lesbian erotica is prominent enough to have really become cliche. Maybe lesbian erotica written for men, because that has been around a lot longer. But this is written by a woman for a woman. So, maybe the cliche is there for a reason. Maybe that's the way we really like it. Just a thought. I will look at revising it though, I have not taken a good look at it in a while.
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you are very good at describing a scene that the reader can visualise easily. the story flows well and doesnt seem forced in any part. good piece.
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I really like this story, and I thought it was a good addition to the site...it was really descriptive, and as a reader should, I could imagine it easily
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WoW....this was amazing. Great job. This is pretty darn good. Loved it!
<3 Jenali -
awsome!!!!
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Awesome. You did amazing with this piece... painting images in my mind with your descriptions and erotic beauty. Keep up the exellent work and thank you so much for the entry
~Kevan!~
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