could this really work: chapter 2

Once Tyler and Nicole got off the plane in Las Vegas, and checked in at the Luxor Hotel, Nicole took out her fake I.D. and placed it in the back pocket of her skinny jeans.

“I’ve never been to Vegas, and I’m not going to waste it, I’m going to hit the tables.” Nicole laughed.

“I’m going to hit up the bars and strip clubs around here.” Tyler replied slyly. Nicole guffawed,

“Just remember who you’re here with.” She winked and left the room. After two hours of winning and losing (mostly winning at blackjack), a sexy stranger sat next to her at the blackjack table. He was carrying around a full bottle of Jose Cuervo. Apparently he just bought it. The dealer dealt him in, and right away he got a black jack. Nicole couldn’t help but shift her eyes to glance at him. He met her gaze.

“First time at this table and you already won, beginner’s luck much?” Nicole teased. The stranger flashed her cocky grin, and went back to the game. Nicole and the stranger went back and forth between winning and losing with each other. After an hour of battling, the cocktail lady came around saying “cocktail” in her most monotonous voice either of them has ever heard. The stranger pulled her over

“another Jose Cuervo, and one for the lady as well. Make sure hers has a lime slice.” The stranger ordered. The cocktail lady took their order, and went to go get the two beers.

“Well that’s very nice of you.” Nicole flashed the stranger an innocently sexy smile.

“you’re welcome.” He said when the waitress brought them the drinks. After another hour and forty bucks spent on alcoholic beverages, Nicole collected her winnings, and started to leave the table.

“where you going?” the stranger asked. Nicole leaned forward and whispered into his ear.

“If you’re smart, you’ll follow me.”

Nicole disappeared into the crowd of gamblers, making the sexy stranger lose his way. Nicole made her way onto the escalator, that led up to the pool hall. She watched her follower look stunned and confused as he tried looking for her. He looked up, and noticed her smiling deviously. He jumped onto the escalator as she got off. He arrived at the pool hall, and already the balls were set in a triangle, and Nicole had a pool stick in her hand.

“So this is where you planned to take off too. Well would you mind if I joined?” he asked

“Nope, don’t mind at all. In fact, that was plan along. With the added bonus of beating your ass.”

“Watch it missy, you may not see me on TV, but I’m better than the greatest pool participant here.”

“Cocky much?” Nicole laughed

“Yes, just without the Y.” The stranger kinked his eyebrows. Guys who cracked jokes like that, instantly made Nicole hot for them, and this guy was definitely pushing all the right buttons. Nicole watched her pool and blackjack partner move swiftly as if he was one with the stick. She couldn’t help it but want him right then and there. She put her stick back on the stand and placed one manicured hand on his broad shoulder.

“you’re really turning me on.” Nicole whispered in his ear. She leaped up onto her tiptoes and kissed his beautiful, soft, pink lips. He placed his hands on her svelte hips and walked her backwards until her back was against the wall. The smell of beer and strawberries filled their little space of oxygen.

“I knew you were good pool player and black jack player, but I never would have expected this.” She breathed in his scent.

“I never would have expected your kiss to taste so sweet.” He replied.

“I’m Nicole.” She introduced herself before she dove back in for another luscious kiss.

“Jonathan.” He replied in between breaths. Nicole thought that was such a hot name, she went full force into this make out session. Jonathan’s hands were groping every inch of her body.

“Hey take that to your hotel room!” barked one of the hotel employees. Both of them looked at the employee and smiled. They both thought the same thing.

“I have a place where it’s more comfortable.” He whispered. She kissed him once more.

“so do I.” she gasped. He kissed her once more.

“but I don’t know when my roommate will be back.” She replied breathlessly. She looked up at him with gleaming eyes. He took her hand, and led her inside his suite. More kisses, and less clothes. More pleasure less worry. 4:30 in the morning, Nicole awoke from her dreamless sleep. She tugged on the small chain that turned on the bedside lamp. She reached for her watch, and her eyes shot open as she realized the time. She pulled her sweaty, naked body away from Jonathon’s and grabbed the sheet to wrap around herself. She changed back into her clothes, and planted a soft kiss on Jonathan’s lips. He didn’t wake up but Nicole could have sworn a soft smile formed on his lips. She left his hotel room and raced up to her own room.

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  • Rosemary silver member
    May 29, 2007
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    Good story

    Nice steamy scenes. Good descriptions.


  • ObsidianEntity
    May 28, 2007
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    wow this is good, I love it! I want to read more! lol Great story.


  • bedovich
    May 14, 2007

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    niceeeeeeee this is so good : i liked the flow alots great work good lucks in it dear


  • travis34dietC
    May 13, 2007
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    contiue this asap!! great job!

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