“Please tell me you love me” he pleaded over the phone.
“I….I… I’m sorry.” I said hesitantly.
“But I thought you and me…”
“What?” he said it so quietly, I didn’t hear the rest of what he had to say.
“I love you though…” he mumbled under his breathe.
Oh my gosh. I wish he quite telling me that; this boy has been all over me for months.
“James.” I said slowly losing my patience. “We are over. We’ve been over for the past few weeks.”
“Doesn’t mean I’ll quite loving you.”
And you would think a girl would be happy to hear that.
“That’s what I mean.”
“What?” he said taking a pause. “I can change…”
“I already given you a second chance, you blew it.” I said it as harshly as I could.
“There’s always a third chance, right?” he said it with a little hope in his voice.
“No. James I already told you.”
“Fine, if you don’t love me…” he hesitated for a moment. “…I guess….what’s the point in living?”
“What are you saying?”
“I have a gun to my head.” He said.
“Don’t go emo on me.” I said.
“I can’t live with out you.” He had desperation in his voice, I got a little scared.
“James. I care about you. Don’t do this. Life is worth living.” I said it as calmly as I could. I wanted to yell and get this psycho boy out of my life.
“Not if the person you didn’t mean to give your whole heart out rejects you.” I pressed the phone close to my ears and, I could tell he was saying that with tears coming out of his eyes.
“James. There are a whole lot of other girls who love you.”
“But I only want you to love me.”
I didn’t know what to say.
“Do you love me?”
There was a long silence.
“I…” I began but didn’t finish. I didn’t want to lie to him but then I didn’t want him dead either.
Silence filled the air.
Then big sound of an explosion, a clank of the phone, and a collapse of a last breath, fell.
My heart raced.
Tears streamed down my eyes and I uncontrollably started weeping.
Author notes
this is what almost happened when my friend told her "bf" she didn't love him anymore.
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OMG! Nawww; I feel fer her. Poor James thoughh! Rahwr. Awsomez story hunni!
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emo!!
wow..it's simply wow!!!
dunno how to Xplain wat i feel after readin dis..beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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no words to describe how i feel.
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this is one of the few stories that really touch my heart
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That was ...
INCREADABLE
one of the best things i've read so far ,,great ,well done xxx
beginning: 2, language: 3, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 4.
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oh my god
oh my god if i wernt in stuidy hall i would be cryingbeginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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omg..
that was so sad, i almost cryed...
my eyes burn!!
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i cried its so sad its a great story
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