Im Jeremy Thomspson and i live in the little town of Chatsworth. Boy do i have a story to tell you all.. It was a birght summer morning and i was as usual taking my dog Jo-jo for a walk by through the forest. As i was walking through i suddenly heard this voice calling. It sounded like a young boy, i went towards the voice. After walking for many miles in the opposite direction jo-jo stopped at a large hole. It was very deep and dusty. I yelled out to the boy and told him to wait for a while.
Jo-jo and me ran back to the town and to the police station. We told the officer what had happened that morning and they followed us to the hole. It was a good thing we heard that young boy cry that morning. After the police got him out of the hole they asked him how he got in there.
You would not guess what had happened to that young boy. One evening whilst on his way home from playing the boy saw some men selling some drugs to some young children. He thought that the men would listen to him so he went up to them and told them to stop at once. He told them he is harming innocent children by selling them drugs.The men were very angry with him so they told him that if he told anyone at all they would hurt him very badly. So the boy agreed to stay quiet and went back home. The next morning the boy went to the police and told him about those men. The police thanked him and went looking for those men. Later they arrested them.
He had been in that hole for two days now. A few months later Tom and his friends were playing in there spot as usual.While the boys were playing and having fun, a few older men appeared. The other boys ran away as quick as they could. This young boy Tom just stood there. The men ran towards him and chased him around. He began to out run them, but then there was a dead end. The men caught hold of the boy and threw him into the ditch. They told him that they had given him a warning. But because he did not listen to them he had to suffer now. The boy was scared now, he did not know what to do. He stayed in the ditch till the men left. After they were gone he tired to climb out but it was to high. So the boy sat there helpless the boy just stayed in the hole.
It was only when he yelled this morning for help that we heard him and came to his resuce.Jo-jo and me walked the boy back to his mother and father in the town. Those men were arrested once again.
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I really liked the excitement in the boys adventure! you did very well!!!
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This was good, below the old word limit but oh wells its changed now and I will accept this, you can enter again and aniwais lol.
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Ebbz
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d this is so good
goodlucks in ebbs contest i know she'll love ur story



