Sacred Caves
Prologue: Last of the Fallen
Bruce ’Bear’ Kenhole staggered the last few steps to the caves’ entrance and turned. His foot was broken and his left arm hung uselessly by his side. The boulders that were falling down inside the cave came closer but fell into the deeper part of the cave. Bruce sighed in relief and turned. He shrieked, just as his men had done when the were killed by the boulders, for as he shrieked the low bladed knife that had swung down cut his head off. His shriek was cut off abruptly.
Silence.
Death.
A howl came from the cave. Not one of anguish.
One of triumph.
These caves were sacred.
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shrieking men...weird thought...more like screaming...
This was a good story. Needs more details, the intensity however was good.
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