Under 200 Words You Say?

He excitedly clicked 'Enter a new story' as ideas began to flood in and out of his brain. He knew that it would be easy to write something quickly, but he could not decide which flash of inspiration to type into the text box.

He decided to turn off the television in the background, so it would not distract him from making the perfect choice. He really was eager to win this contest, as he planned to use the prize points to feature something special he had been working on.

He brought his fingers down onto the keys, and the short story began to take shape. He chose not to give a detailed introduction to the only character in the story, as this would use up valuable words that could be spent on something more exciting.

His brain continued to produce a vast array of potential plots and characters, but he refused to be swayed from his original plan. He knew that this story would be in with a chance of winning as long as he made the most of the two hundred words at his disposal.

He decided now would be a good time for a word count.

A contest entry

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  • Sailor Mars
    January 18, 2008
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    it's ok but i think mabye you could of used bigger words not really, hope you won the contest.


  • EmeraldDreams
    September 17, 2007
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    Well, I think we can all relate to moments like this! Great piece, funny, witty and clever.


  • LuciferLight
    May 18, 2007

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    ROTFLMAO!!! Hilarious, original, surprising. Actually this was a pretty good idea you have thought of, and I give you three applause for this. I am so getting my other friends to read it. This is CLASSIC!!


  • Blackwings
    May 11, 2007

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    Funny of course That was original I LIKED it lots Nicely done


  • katiefran
    May 11, 2007

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    you......are....well, amazing. but besides that, exceedingly original, funny and well written. no matter what you write, it seems to make me laugh. well, then again, almost everything makes me laugh! that's a little sad. you should try to write something that won't make me laugh. could be an interesting experiment! oh, well, congrats on writing yet another humorous masterpiece.


  • Zaedyns Mommy
    May 11, 2007

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    I almost pissed on myself laughing. I love your stories, you always know how to make someone smile, weither be in a morbid or sweet way.


  • QueenWolf
    May 11, 2007

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    LOL, I love it! i cant stop laughing! this is the first time i have had something like this entered! Congrats on making me giggle Good luck in the contest friend

    ~Princess~

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