“Beyond Tomorrow”



• Beyond tomorrow lies a day

Miles and miles away

Hours and hours far

Beyond the flaming star

There awaits a brand new day

Where the sunrays spray

• Beyond tomorrow stays so remote

To which tomorrow comes to promote

Beyond tomorrow lies a mystery

Yet to unfold into the pages of history

Ahead lay stories yet to be told

Secrets and words yet to hold

• Beyond the moving clouds

Of masked like shrouds

Lies the glimmering bright sun

With my things to be done

Far into the sky

Questions rose asking why

• Beyond tomorrow could be mortal

Holding mysterious portals

Far beyond the invisible

Many secrets will be visible

Once tomorrow falls

And beyond tomorrow rolls

• Beyond tomorrow could be a day

Where you leave away

Beyond tomorrow could denote

You and I living remote

Beyond tomorrow is in a hue

The way tomorrow is too

• Tomorrow is unknown

Still much to go till dawn

Who knows beyond tomorrow?

Maybe we will depart and go

Beyond tomorrow could be the day

When we and death come to meet

Where fatality comes to greet

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ON: Wednesday, May 09, 2007

AT: 11:43:32 PM

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  • LostShadow silver member
    May 20, 2007

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    I think I have read this one, very nicely written yet again. Great flow and description.

    Keep up the great work.

    Em


  • sodancewithsoda silver member
    May 13, 2007

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    Wow.. I love "tomorrow" it holds so much promise, so much hope... ^_^ sometimes, I even wonder IF we really reach "tomorrow"...

    But then again, if I stay up too late, I reac that time when "it's already tomorrow" - but that moment is enchanting still

    This is a great write, Pete ^_^ a nice tribute to tomorrows and what it can give us Thank you for sharing thsi with us!


    • bedovich
      May 14, 2007
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      anytime sodaD i am so happy that you liked it much thankful hun


  • asthray.heart
    May 10, 2007
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    You already know I like this one Pete

    xoxo


  • Blackwings
    May 10, 2007

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    OMG!!!! I sooo LOVE this! It's soooo great!!! I of course loved the flow and the poem!!!! Keep writing

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