White, puffy clouds light up the crimson sky. Dusk draws near as we decide to go for a ride. We drive to the lake with nothing particular in mind. Just a way to pass the time and enjoy each other's company.1
You park the car in a secluded area as light rain begins to fall. You see the disappointment on my face as I gaze at the large drops sliding down the window. Without saying a word, you get out and walk around to my side. Opening the car door, you reach out your hand for mine. With a little reluctance, I take your hand and get out of the car. "What is there to do in the rain?", I ask innocently. "You will see", you say with a grin on your face.2
You put your hands on my waist and slowly lift me onto the hood of the car. You stand in front of me sliding me on the rain slicked hood so that I am closer to you. The rain by now has soaked my white tank top and you clearly see the perfect outline of my breasts. You lean in kissing me softly and sucking the rainwater off my lips. Simultaneously, your hands slide up my skirt revealing I am not wearing any panties. I lay back on the hood of the car as you lean down and lift me up to your mouth. You taste my sweetness as your tongue swirls, making my entire body quiver in sheer pleasure. You bring me to climax 3 times before you stop, causing me to scream your name over and over. 3
You then pull me back up, and unbuttoning your pants, you tell me to turn around. Without hesitation, I turn over so that my hands and knees are resting on the hood. You grind your hips into my ass, just to give me a feel of your rock hard erection. You slowly enter me feeling my muscles tighten up around you. With each deep stroke, I slide closer to you, panting uncontrollably and whimpering your name. The rain intensifies as our rhythm grows rapid. With your hands on my hips, you pull me into you harder and faster. Pushing and pulling with endless strokes, you make me scream out in ecstasy. With one more deep thrust, you explode inside of me sending shock waves through my entire body. You collapse on top of me as the rain starts to let up. Planting small kisses from my back to my neck, you whisper in my ear, "Now, that's what you do in the rain."4
Author notes
What is more sensual than love in the rain with TheRainKing? hehehe Love you, Baby!! 
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This one was more like a sex story... Another winner though, keep em' comin! I still liked the first one, but there all very interesting...
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There's nothing better than doing it in the rain(girl). Talk about passion, lust and pure excitement, it's all in there rolled into one lucious cloud of rain! ENCORE!
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Ted E. -
Okay...I might go have to tackle Ice (that's even funnier since he's playing a football game on the PS2 LOL) now...it's raining...I wanna go play in it! Excellent descriptions here, the imagery is just superb!
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i agree with vampress, i don't want to know if this is true or not!!Guess its best when u don't know...fantasies are the best. Great write.
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Yes, that is what you do in the rain! This is a great story, but I don't want to know if it's true or not, lol. Within this you put two of my options, rain and sex, yay for you! Got my mind thinking, but then hey I've already done that myself in the rain. It's fun though, hehe. Okay, too much info now, lol sorry.
Anywho, great job. Thank you for entering it into my contest, and good luck.
Vampress -
This is another thing u dont let guys see... well ya u let us see it
this was a GREAT wirte u went into such details.. one ?, have u did this before lol ! Something where u come up with that... LOL j/p Jennerz Great Write
Twiz -
amazing! this is an awesome poem! great job with the descriptions! good luck in my contest!
peace, love, and rock n' roll!!!!
Shana
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naughty Jenn, you need a good lickin' did not know you had it in ya
keep it up bad bad bunny
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Holy shit, this is awesome. wow that would be fun!! great work!
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Way to go sweetheart... *Bite*...
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Romeo -
heheheh... ~whip cracks~ down boy!! lmao.. heheheh i do believe me and a special someone have something to do in the rain now... what a great idea!! thank yeh!!
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ohhhh and im the demented one here huh lol your putting me up for a fight to my title here (ponders a bit hmmmmm) okay okay so you got me beat you got a story i got a poem muahahaha wait till next time its on girlie lmao great poem and visualizations he he i gotta go take me a cool shower now brb
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I have to say that I absolutely loved the imagery. You wrote exactly what others can envision. Good Work! Oh, by the way, for me the words wouldn't be 'Hell Yeah!' but more like.... PERFECT. I loved the story.
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sounds like someone had a good weekend
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DAMN GIRL! *giggl* This is naughty! lol But it's really good. Very descriptive... and real. This is the kind of thing that could really happen...there's some stories on here that are just way too far fetched. But I could totally picture this. Great job hun. Jen... I never knew you were so dirty. LOL jk I love it. Great job!
DanielleMarie
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Nice but I think it needs to be fleshed out more, more detailed desciptions of where your at and whats around you and would be nice.
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Ummmm....okayyyy, TWO WORDS...H-E-L-L Y-E-A-H!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oww..
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oh yes, that's definately what to do in the rain!!!
very nice piece you wrote here!
mike -
A wonderful portrayal of sensuality that combines the lure of nature's beauty with the effect on the human senses if we leave ourselves open to it . You created beauty with your words and your theme
Reenie
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YES! YES! YES! Hell yeah!!! That's all I can truly say! Somebodies got a great imagination, or had ONE HELL of a weekend!!!
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Hot piece... what is it about rain that makes things feel sexier? This was really well written, read like beautiful short prose, rather than a poem. Sounds like you could make lovely romance novels from this type of work. In fact, I encourage you do pursue that. Not that you're not a good poet- you're a very talented writer. I just loved the erotic descriptions so much. Makes me want to try this myself sometime... soon.
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lol, Jenn. This sounds like me and "bladesbestfriend" ::clears throat, cough!cough.:: lol, well it is really emotional and has ALOT of feeling. I wasnt expecting it, but it was really good. keep it up gurl.ttyl. ~4444~
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Damn, you didn't get one decent length critique on this thing yet, My first bit of advice is to change this to a story, cos it is a story but you've posted it as a poem, and in featured, lazy people might click to read a poem, see a story and not comment. if you post as a story a lil book comes up next to it,
Ok I've rambled sufficiently. this story was very short, but you fit everything into it and you didnt use any of the disgraceful forbidden erotica words (mound,bud,nub,manhood,member,succelent, bum,bottom, etc... they're all listed on my author page if you're unsure )
So on a scale of the erotica we get here, you rated pretty high.
Jadey xXxXx
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this is really good. you did a great job with this piece of writing. hope to see more soon!
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I absolutely loved it! incredible, and so sexy!!
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Enjoyable piece of...Uhhh
Erotica..
Nicely done, in my favorite fashion, although I left the read wanting more description on the atmosphere and sensation..
Ciao,
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liked it
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Holy wow there Jenniepoo. You really are in to being naughty aren't you!!!!! I really enjoyed reading this write. Well I love it. Love Heather
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HOT!
Very hot, Jenn! I loved it! You are good at being naughty.
Keep it up! -Rachel
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Holy shit! Ok hunny, damn! That was yummy . I can't wait to live out this one hehehe. Made my pants feel tight hehehe. Now I gotta go ummm do something hehehe. Love you baby, Jason
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