a dream so real

flashback

"Danielle..." His brother Lucas, yelled into the phone

"Lucas... I'm here what's wrong?" I began to panic.

"It's James he was in a car accident. Meet me at Honey Grove Memorial Hospital." Lucas instructed and hung up before I could respond. I grabbed my keys and wallet, when I saw James’ USC sweatshirt crumbled up in the corner of my bed. I began to have a meltdown.
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CandyisDELISH: I’m sorry, I’m just really upset.

RockQueen89: dot dot dot.

CandyisDELISH: I’m just praying he’s okay.

“Hey There Delilah” by the plain white tee’s was booming from the speakers when I heard a soft hi. I jerked my head and James was standing in my doorway in dark blue jeans and black sweatshirt.

“Oh my gosh, hi!” I exclaimed. I ran up to him and hugged him. He winced a bit; apparently I touched a sore spot on his body.

“How do you feel?” I asked.

“Hurting.” His voice was hoarse. I guided him to the couch and he sat down. He pulled me next to him, wrapped his arms around my waist and gave me my fairytale kiss.

“I love you.” I whispered. He kissed me again

“I love you too.”

I smiled and placed my head on his chest. For what he said next I was not prepared for.

“Marry me.” He whispered.

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  • LostShadow silver member
    May 23, 2007

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    you cannot just leave it there! if you do thats mean

    this was get and fast paced.

    Descriptions were really well done in such a short body of work.

    Keep up the great work

    Em

  • Carly Pop gold member
    May 21, 2007
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    Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Little Blue Bird
    May 21, 2007
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    HUH

    What happens next!? I gotta know!! Love it so far. Keep it up.


  • bedovich
    May 10, 2007

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    hoooooooooorayyyyyyyy

    great story hun i loved the flow and the end is so lovely


  • asthray.heart
    May 10, 2007

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    Wow that was good as, you left the reader hanging and omg I love that song by the plain white t's .

    Good luck in the contest

    Lady Madeline.


    • plurangel silver member
      May 10, 2007
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      thank you i love that song too, it reminds me of my current (sorta) boyfriend lol. glad you liked it.

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