CHAPTER 2 of Young Love

God my life's great, I went around with a smile on my face instead of the usual frown.  Ever since that day I have been the happiest man alive, and will be for as long as she is mine.  1

And we both lived happily ever after.2

The end.3

THIS CONCLUDES THE STORY OF YOUNG LOVE.4

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  • Fraon
    June 26, 2004
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    If you think there is more to the story than that, I would love to hear your perspective on it. I know you've got some good memories, or at least I hope you do. I have plenty more I could add to Young Love, though I felt that the story should conclude there for readers. Though for us Leona, the story has just begun.


    Love

    ~Dios~

  • Tu Leona
    June 26, 2004
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    That's not nice. There's more to the story than that. Oh well, it's your writings.

    ~>Tu Leona<~

  • Tu Leona
    June 22, 2004
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    Hurry up and finish it.

    ~>Tu Leona<~