The Letter (epilogue)

Jamie brought up some hot chocolate and cookies.  Then she sat down on the bed beside Kevin and listened.1

As Kevin babbled on about how this week had been a real struggle, Jamie just nodded and hugged him.  As she closed her eyes she appreciated the chance to listen to his voice, a voice that was almost lost forever a few short weeks ago.  In her mind was an image of Kevin in a coffin, and that image made her hug him tighter.  He had promised to tell her his feelings, to not let them build up inside.  On this promise they were both surviving.2

Author notes

Sucky ending, but there's only so long a story can continue.  I'm really bad at ending stories.

I thought this was pretty alright though.

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  • June 22, 2004
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    Your very welcome thanks for sharing.
    *~OD~*

  • translucent
    June 22, 2004
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    Thanks for reading!


  • June 22, 2004
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    Yeah it was an alright ending.. i like this... *gets inspired to write* Love the story awesome job... I will be sure to read more of your work when i have the time... but right now i must go.
    *~OD~*