All Jamie saw was an elbow, blood, and the back of a gun. She reached out and grabbed it, her mind working in autopilot. She flung the gun across the alley as Kevin's body collapsed onto hers. "I needed to...please save me...I'm sorry"1
Jamie's tears poured onto his unconscious face as she held him to her and dialed 911 on her cell phone. Words tumbled out at the operator, and Jamie only hoped she was making sense. When the lady on the other end seemed satisfied, Jamie tried desparately to somehow hold together Kevin's torn arms. she tore off her sleeve and wrapped it around his arm, knowing it was doing nothing. When the ambulance came, Jamie didn't know if it had been minutes or hours. The ambulance men let her sit in the back with him and she watched as the nurse bendaged up his arm. Jamie crumpled in the corner and sobbed. There was nothing else that existed, just this ambulance and this wounded boy on the edge of death.2
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it was purely coincidence.... didn't notice it until my friend pointed it out to me... lol... no worries my mind tends to run away sometimes and doesn't come back for days.. lol
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WOAH... I just noticed... is your initials OD on purpose? As in does it stand for what I think it stands for?
Or is that just a coincedence?
Heh, I think my imagination's running off again. -
hmmm... yeah you'll need a part five now... *is really liking this* kinda sad i'm liking this story of a guy trying to commit suicide... will he be successful though... hmm... guess i like it because in ways i'm "Jamie".... *sigh* keep it going loving it completely. lol.
*~OD~*
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