Becky

Becky is so lonely.1

They say her last name sounds like a pony.2

She is so weird.3

She really needs to grow a beard.4

She really needs a guy.5

Some one to bake her some apple pie.6

She complains because nobody tells her anything.7

But she really knows everything.8

As you can see Becky is crazy.9

Because she thinks she smells like a frozen daisy.10

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  • Yemassee gold member
    June 25, 2004
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    Rhymes with pony? Joanie, baloney, phoney, crony, hmmm, I might never get to sleep now! Oh, maybe it is Whinnie? Wait, Moo? Oh, I'm way off track now...a cute poem and I don't think she should join the circus...maybe a nuthouse..

  • babylette
    June 21, 2004
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    I think that Becky should join the circus.
    Edited on Jun 21, 6:29 p.m. because ''.

  • macandrew
    June 21, 2004
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    funny

    I think Becky needs to get a new job and run away from the circus.

    Good luck Beck
    Quite funny.
    John


  • tinydarkgoddess
    June 21, 2004
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    I'm going to have to say that Becky is a little...odd It's clever and just makes you smile. Great Job!

    Kamilah