I feel my soul is dieing
My heart is crushed
What happend?
Not to me
My family
I always knew father was disfunctional
But to kill my mother?
That's wrong
Then again
So is my current life
All I do is kill
I taste their blood on my lips
And I wonder
Why do I do what I do?
Because it's in my genes?
Because it's how I was raised?
What's wrong with me?
Author notes
Written in Krystal Uzamais diary at 3:00 a.m. in her house
A contest entry
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170 points, ended June 12, 2007, 16 entries
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I'm not quite sure
I'm not quite sure what the message is... It is a really weird poem...but still pretty good. Work on the backround. change it because I couldn't read it. It will be easier for everyone else...
My rating: OK or AVERAGE
Elementalwolf
PS hey I might be a bit rough but that's life. -
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The messgae isn't really anything.It's a poem that my Naruto oc wrote.Shes a depressed girl who tries to kill poeple....
Krystal: Yes I am and I do
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This was good, full of emotion and very strong. Very sad for Krystal.
Amaya- *weeps in a corner* was sad as
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Shank ya.
~bows~
Kristina: LET ME OUT OF THIS CLOSET!!!
Krystal: ~snickers~
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Aaaw...poor Miyuu-chan...
Aya: ...I know the angst well.
Chibi: o__0 strange thing to say, Aya...
Aya: whatever..
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It's Krystal not Miyuu
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oops my faux-pas!
Aya: you make too many of those
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This person sounds truley awsome and gaaraish...keep it up.
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Because first of all she is Gaaras cousin second of all she was raised by him after Akito Uzamai killed her mother and tried to kill her and Gaara as well
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I know, I read it in that one story.
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Yeah.She's just like her cousin
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