Frailty

Frailty

Battered and broken,

I’ve been left on my own.

Another crush,

Or another heartbreak?

Who I considered my friends,

Have long since left,

I’m alone,

To fend for myself.

The world doesn’t care,

Fake smiles and laughs everywhere.

But I still put on my mask,

And act my scene.

I’m sick of acting,

But I’m scared to quit,

Pressure is closing in,

The walls are tightening.

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i don't think its good but it's my first peice to get published

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  • jtnbuck
    May 17, 2007
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    this was very good i liked very much in deed well done it was just wonderful i liked it


  • Andrew Timothy
    May 7, 2007
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    I can identify with this...Very good