I know you probably don't care,
and I know that I may come off
as a bit...
childish,
immature,
self-centered,
short-tempered,
annoying,
even a little stalkerish...
but I still care.
Even if you don't.
**TheCoffeeGod**
Author notes
Don't ask... I don't know, other that the fact that it's 10:30.
A contest entry
- Under 200 words by QueenWolf.
140 points, ended May 22, 2007, 49 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Short and simple, yet full with words of meaning. You write with emotion, a great talent to have. Good luck in all that you write.


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"oh to be young" is the term i think of when i read this. Well done and very emotional. This reminded me of my other half... he feels the same way when i cant talk to him.
~Princess~ -
Who's not caring here? Because if this is about that one time in LCW, then... never mind. I'll talk to you about it when it's not going to be shown online.
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love it!
i like it, it is very straghit forward and my friend u have many problems but dont we all? lol. good jog and kep writing

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All I can think is "???"
Yeah, extend it or something.
Like Tabby said. -
Hmm, very interesting. If you had made it a little bit longer, it would have been better, though.

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