She listens even though she's deaf
She peasks when she has no mouth
She can walk even though she has no legs
Her eyes are like two forests of green
Once you look at them, you'll get lost in them
Her hair is the color of brunette
She gets good grades in every subject, even if she doesn't show it
This girl's is unique as her clothes
Her clothes are made out of silk, the designs and colors are stunning.
This girl keeps her life in the dark even when everyone in school knows her.
She is as sweet as apple pie, her heart is juicy as chicken.
She assists people when they're in need, no matter how much she despises them.
Her smils is so famous today, they say that her teeth are pieces of painted white gold glued to her gums. I call her teeth...beautiful.
What makes this girl so special? Go talk to ehr and find out...
Please tell me what you think
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I think this should be a story.....Ths looks like a...rUN-oN SeNTenCE,lol.
Keep on Writing!!
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Wow very descriptive. Loved the flow and how you can really picture her in your mind. A few spelling errors but nothing that takes away from the poem.
Lovely once again.
Keep up the great work
Em
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wow
wow good job comic
you should us alot of emtion with this wonderful piece
good job with this again...I love the part her eyes like to forest of green thatwas great you write really well i love your writing good luck comic in all you do and god bless
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Oh comic, this was wonderful! It was beautiful! Good job with this.
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oh my gosh comic this was really terrific. beautiful really.
this may seem mean, but i like it more than your fanfics. i dont mean i dont like your fanfics; i love them. but this was really stunning.
wordings great, and one thing- even though i wanted to cry beacause of how beautiful this was, i giggled when i when this line:
her heart is juicy as chicken.
LOL!
love that simile, it was like comic relief of this poem. sooo you
great job, your a brilliant poet. really. please continue to write these i love it a lot.
my i ask: whered you get the inspiration?
amazing job.
ttys
xoxo lots of love
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Wow!!!!! Nice job!!! I really liked how it kind of told a story of a girl, who has some disblities but still doesn't let that keep her down Nicely done!!!
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