The Bloody Massacre

Blood spewed all over the linoleum floors, organs lay scattered about the room like children's toys that were left to be picked up by their, bodies dangle from rafters high above the floors of the large darkened room, the smell of death hangs amidst the air, bodies are  split open exposing torn innards and foul-smelling fluids. On the alter lays a balding priest, his throat is crushed leaking warm blood onto the already stained alter, dying the satin cloth an even darker red. The cross behind him is severely smashed; no, it's not a church of god, but a church of Satan. Almost in ever row is a lifeless body with cold dead eyes staring up in horror. But in a dark corner a figure is moving, a creature is drinking the blood from a half devoured corpse.

Suddenly there is a loud noise, Boom!

The doors fly open, officers rush in almost tripping over the bodies littering the dark aisles. They stop just short of the door and look around the perimeter of the church, one officers says, "What the hell happened here" thats when he notices something in the dark, "And what the hell is that thing" he hollers, "I have no clue, but whoever or whatever it is, is going back to the station for questioning" announces an elderly officer. The cops slowly approach the shadowed figure with their guns held out before them, the beast pays them no mind, it continues to drink from the still flopping body clutched in it's burning grasp.

"Freeze, put your hands up where I can see them, now. If you don't cooperate I'll blast your sorry piece of shit self into the next world" cries the old officer. The creature does not answer back, "I'll give you to the count of ten to surrender yourself. One...two...three...four...five... "Alright officers, I will reveal myself unto you, but your puny minds may not be able to handle what you see" says the creature climbing to its feet, it steps out of the darkness and into the light, tossing the half devoured corpse at their feet. They back away at the sight of the blood mess that lays at their feet, you can barely even tell that the thing was even human, let alone the gender.

"What manner of creature are you" asks the young officer, awaiting the beasts reply, it does not answer back;  just lets out a loud growl. The beast is at least eight feet tall with long black curved horns jutting from it's temples, there's a large scar extending down the side of it's face, two orb like balls are set under each brow glowing a mysterious greenish-yellow, the mouth is curled into a wide grin exposing sharp dagger-like teeth dripping with wet blood and a silverish saliva. The beasts body is built like a tank, huge and muscular, with skin as red as fire, on the end of each large hand extends large fingers with curved talon like claws that look as if they could rip through flesh with incredible ease, the sound of it's footsteps make it appear as if the creature may weight over a ton. It opens its mouth and speaks, "You mortals shall never learn, you shall die for things that should not be meddled with, you should have stayed home with your families where it was same, now prepare to meet thy doom". He leaps into the air, the lights flicker out, gunshots echo off the walls, the screaming begins, high shrill screams that fill the room almost blocking out the weapon fire.

A few minutes go by, suddenly the lights go back on to reveal a disturbing image, the cops bodies lay scattered about, some slashed, impaled, torn open, or even ripped in half, slowly dying in their own blood. The creature is gone from the church, no where in sight.

Then the sightings begin, people had seen a large creature hopping across rooftops without as much as a glance back. One man ran into his house and grabs his .223 caliber rifle, he aims and shoots, the creature falls to the ground sending a shockwave through it. He walks over to the fallen beast closing in on it for the final shot when a large arm swings out slashing his head off, blood squirts from the neck into the still air, the body falls to the ground. The creature climbs to its feet and continues on to its destination.

In a field only a few miles from the town, the ground splits open, earth falls into the chasm, a bright light emerges drawing the souls of the dead into hell. He stands before the hole, then turns and says, "I will return in one year to finish you puny mortals, if you continue to worship Satan, then you shall soon be joining him, hahahahahahaha!", the creature dives into the hole, a tower of fire rises into the air burning the ground around it and charring the grass to ashes. Smoke fills the air; the winds begin to blow, smothering the fire putting it out. The hole is gone, a large scorched spot is all that remains of the hole, and the horror is finally over. But not for good, the bloody massacre has occurred since the dawn of time, and there is no stopping it.

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  • Blackwings
    May 3, 2007
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    Yay bloody massacre!!!! I LOVED the discriptions!!!! Nicely done!~!! Yay gore!!!! Maybe you could make the paragraphs a bit more spaced? It's hard to read it when everything's all one big block, but enough critisim. I rele liked it! Well, I LOVE gory things