Romericco's Daemons

Romericco the Red 1

Romericco exited the grounds silently, the rain still beating on his caramel complexion. His black eyes surveyed the dark forests before him. It was still not close to dawn, so he decided to rest while the only light was from the twinkling stars. He strode into the woods, knife in hand, following the trail he had hacked out so many years ago. Though his thirst lingered in his mind, he doubted that anything besides rats and owls would linger in the forest this late at night. He hadn’t had a proper meal in three days, and his strength was beginning to diminish. He knew he could always ask Ursula for food, but it would come cheap, landing more of his fragmented soul into her black talons. He finally came to the clearing, where he had spent so many of his empty days waiting in vain for death to sweep him off with her withering black wings.  This clearing had been his domain for years. The tall trees blocked the harmful noon sun out, and had been a haven for his prey. Romericco more or less, slept in a thatch hut he had made himself. With only a roof over him, a fire pit, and a pile of soft hay, he resided here calling it his home. Ursula, with all of her beauty and power, lived in a beautiful dark mansion that she had one of her many once lovers turned snacks had invested in. Striding through his hut, he lay down upon the soft hay. It was warm and dry, so unlike outside. He could hardly remember his old home, and his old family. He had even forgotten how to speak his native language. He had lived in Barcelona in the late 16th century. His family was all Spaniards, and his father was a well-known conquistador. He had had four brothers and two sisters beside himself. He strained to remember their names. He had been the fourth youngest out of the six.  There had been his eldest brother, Dominick. They had also been Alejandro, the second eldest, and his eldest sister Rosario. Then it had been himself at seventeen, and then there had been the youngest children, Sarafina, Maria, and Miguel. The family was everything he had, and they were all gone. All dead. All because of him. And he, the one who had caused everything, was the fool who had survived. He sighed and rolled on his stomach. The drops of water landing on his long ebony hair told him there was a break in the thatch. So much evil was in the world. What had happened to the days Dominick had taught him how to joust on his father’s mare? What had happened to the days that there had been bonfires in the hot summer days, where he and his sisters had danced until their feet grew lame? And what had happened to the days that he had twirled little Maria around when she came to him, face smudged with flour? All gone. Romie, little Maria had called him. But now it was all gone, never again. Many nights into the centuries little Maria’s laughing had haunted him, the sound of his sisters screaming as they were impaled, and the cries of his brothers calling for help while bleeding to death. As many times as he had revisited that night in his dreams, he wondered what he could have done to prevent his family’s murders. Ricco, Ricco, a grim voice said echoing through his head. The voice had been there since the day he died. “ Still doting upon the past, are you?” He loathed this little voice; he never knew when it was listening to his thoughts. He sometimes had enough strength to drive it from his body, tuning the voice out of his head, fighting for control of his mind. Tonight, however, he had not time to feed, and thus could not drive the voice out. “Romericco the Red, you listen to me! Ursula is getting very impatient with you! The meeting of the moons will occur in less than a fortnight. You are to bring the idol into the castle before the meeting. In many, many years of service to Ursula you have been faithful.” 2

Romericco burst out, yelling in his mind, “I am not her cocker spaniel Darius!” 3

“You are whom you were born and you were born a vampire!” 4

Romericco turned, angered at the voice ready to leave his domain when it called to him again, this time louder and more real. 5

“You can’t run from who you are.” At this Romericco turned. Seated in the low branches of a nearby tree was a man with ivory skin and long chestnut hair. “Romericco you are being stupid. Look at yourself. You haven’t fed in days. You are denying yourself as a vampire.” 6

“Damn being a vampire. I don’t want life any more. I don’t want my immortality, strip me of it!” He reached into his coat and pulled out a dagger. He unsheathed it, and thrust it into the man’s hands. He stood back and undid the buttons in his black shirt, his chest laboring from heavy intake of breath. “ Do it Darius, please. Right now, end it for me. One shot, right here”, he said pounding his fist to his heart. “Darius please. I suffer. As one of my kindred I beg of you. If I had the courage that you have, I’ve had done it when my love died. I have nothing to live for. I can never love, because love always dies. It pains me that something so pure can die; yet I can live forever. I don’t want it. I want to die like even the purest love. So please Darius…please.” 7

The man looked at Romericco, understanding in his eyes. “Romericco, I’m sorry,” he said driving the dagger into the soggy earth. “Come Ricco. Let us find you a nice morsel. You’ll feel better, I promise.” He said jumping down from his perch and landing stealthily next to Romericco.  He put Romericco arm over his shoulder and bid him to walk. 8

“My head aches”, Romericco croaked feebly. 9

“You starve yourself, its bound to happen.” Said Darius reproachfully. 10

“Darius why did you choose this” asked Romericco weakly. 11

“To become a vampire? For the same reason you did.” 12

“Did you know it was going to be this way?” 13

Darius shrugged. “I suppose not. Cheating death. That’s all it is.” 14

“Death would be better to face head on”, said Romericco stumbling. 15

“Yes. Well. I suppose to know death you must know life first.” 16

“I want either. I have experienced none”, Romericco groaned disdainfully. 17

“Time, Ricco, time will tell you what the answer is. You have eternity after all.” 18

“Yes…’ Romericco muttered. “Darius?” 19

“Yes Romericco?” 20

“Thank you.” 21

“Romericco the Red. You are truly a vampire of many colours.” 22

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This is the second chapter of my book, but I thought it was worth a try. Go easy on me, I'm only 14.

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  • TourniquetofBlood
    July 30, 2005
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    Ayla, with each chapter I read, I begin to get more and more interested. This is excellent, even better than the story I write for you.


  • flipflopinTM
    July 13, 2005
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    wow nice job


  • October 24, 2004
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    This actually very good! I can tell you that I was never this good at 14. ANyway, good luck in the contest!


  • Araina
    October 20, 2004
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    Wonderful

    This is amazing! I must go back and read the first chapter, and continue on from there sometime. This was really good. Are you sure you're only fourteen?! Anyway, the dialogue, the descriptions, it was all perfect. I especially liked how you said he had a caramel complexion. That was awesome. Good job, and good luck in the contest (I'm thinking you'll probably win, but I'm not a judge).

  • BurdentoSorrow
    October 19, 2004
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    You write incredibly well, this story is one out of few on this site that kept my interest and I didn't even start at the beginning. As for your age, I'm 14 also and your writing is extremely mature and intelligent compared to mine. I wish you luck in the contests that you've entered.


  • October 17, 2004
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    Very good description, I like it a lot.
    Thank you for entering it into the contest.
    ^_^

  • SleepyEyedreams
    September 6, 2004
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    Hmmm...this is pretty good, not what I expected but then you can't judge a story by a title. You see Daemons reminded me of a great book a read years ago called The Golden Compass, this however is nothing like that. Well good luck on the contest!
    -karr

  • NeonNihilism
    July 26, 2004
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    lol, really really awesome..... reading more now

  • EmptyProdigy
    July 3, 2004
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    Awesome- Intense!

    Oh wow, this was, intense, to say the least. I love the entire thing. Damn idiot denying himself, hmm, oh well, hmm doing that made this all the more intense! Keep it up!

  • lettersfromthelost
    July 2, 2004
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    YAY! I really like this. You are a great writer... you remind me of myself at your age. I wrote one about a werewolf, though...
    Any way, keep it up! Let's see some more of this story!!!


  • InvisibleKitty
    July 2, 2004
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    dont worry about your age i wrote my first book when i was 10. for a 14 yr old your pretty good. i read your other one the chapter 14. it was good too. i hope to see more soon.


  • PyrricVictory
    July 2, 2004
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    I think for being just 14 you have a good grasp on what the reader wants and expects. This is a good write and it caught my attention. I couldn't stop reading it. I wanted to know what happened next.

  • Mildew in PinK tile
    July 1, 2004
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    So this a book your writing right? Your doing pretty good.. you have caught my attention.... This entry was just as good as the phenoix one.. i liked it very much. Thank you for being in my contest i do appreicate it.

    -Audri-


  • June 29, 2004
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    Thank you for entering and good luck... You've now reached your limit..
    *~OD~*

  • whispernthedark
    June 27, 2004
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    You did pretty good. I do have one thing I noticed though. I believe in one of your other chapters, you said Ricco had a chocolate complexion, in this one you gave him a caramel one. This is well written, thank you for entering the contest.

    ~whisper

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