"An elevator?" Laine screemed. "You said you've just found your future husband, and now your telling me that you met him in an elevator?"
"Well, I was at the dentist, and they had just put that floride tray in my mouth, and told me to keep it in while my mom paid at the front office, so I was going down to tell her I was all done when *he* walked in with me and...."
"Wait, so you were talking to him, while you looked like a duck!" she had started to yell again. "Well I didn't exactaly talk to him. Well, I tried to when he said hello, but the yellow tray fell out and I got my spit all over his shoes." "Oh my gosh Claire! What did he do?"
"He just kinda smiled at me, and looked like he was trying not to laugh. Then I glanced down at his papers and saw that his name was Clive Kinkle! Isn't that the most dreamy name you've ever heard?" Claire replied.
" Iguess, if your working at the Pet Club..."
"Oh stop it Laine! Anyway, so he looked at me real close and said, we go to the same school right? And I just sort of nodded. And he said, Oh well see you tomarrow! Yay!" "Sounds like you had fun! Well I've gotta hang up now, but I'll see you tomarrow too! Happy almost thirteenth birthday!"
"Thanks, bye!"
As the best friends were walking down the hallway the next morning, when the janitor was pushing a trash can out of the cafateria.
"Claire, your shoe is untied!" Laine said.
"Oh no problem, I'll just tie it right by those lockers. Just when she bent over the trash can hit her, pouring all of its content all over her! Just when she thought she wiped everything off of her, "OMG! Claire, here comes Clive!"
"Doesn't he just have perfect timing?" Claire said sarcasticly. "Yep-o, first the dentist duck beak, and now the rotten banana!" Laine replied.
"Um, hi, it's Claire isn't it?" Clive asked.
"Yeah, I saw you at the dentist yesterday right?"
"Yeah, um, I just wanted to tell you that I think you have the worlds most perfect teeth."
" Thanks, I didn't go through three years of braces for nothing!" she replied. "Listen, I'm having a birthday party tonight, you wouldn't want to.."
"I'd love to." Clive said with a smile. "That is if you were about to invite me?"
"Of cource I was!, so I'll see you around seven?"
"That sounds great!" he replied.
"Great, so bye!"
"Bye. Oh and one other thing,"
"Yeah," Claire said.
"You've got yogurt on your nose."
Author notes
The moral to this story is, just be yourself and everything will fall into place, even if you do have yogurt on your nose!
btw, i wrote this for a contest.
A contest entry
- THE BEST CONTEST I'VE HAD!! by Taylor Renee.
175 points, ended July 13, 2007, 17 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - First kiss by Christa Steiner.
175 points, ended May 28, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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oh my gosh this was sooo fun!!!
i enjoyed this soo much! it was so cute.
i think this was sooo amusing great writing nice little story!
you should continue it and make it a big long story!
xoxo
keep it up!
Tay
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wow this was okay i guess it was very funny good job and keep up the great work this was nice i love the purple good job and god bless
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purple is my favoritist color!
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It's cute how you added a moral to this little story. It's a moral that will actually help, unlike this one poem I read awhile back where the moral was, 'Don't stew your sister' Yeah...it was a weird poem. Anywho...wish you the best of luck for your contest!
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Lol! This was FUNNY! hahahaha yogurt up ur nose! lol -
Aww this was funny and quite sweet! Love the simple wording.
I wish you lots of luck in the contest!
Keep writing!
Annie 
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There were two minor spelling mistakes.
"futrue husband."
This is just a typing error I think, , "future husband."
"Pouring all of it's contense all over her."
Contense should be written like this, "Pouring all of it's contents all over her."
That's all I saw for mistakes, it was a pretty funny story, cutely written. Good job!
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ok, thanks. glad you liked it, ill go fix those mistakes!
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wowww great job this was great i loved it
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kt that is sooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!!! i loooooooved it : )!!!!!!! i loooved the moral 2!!
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