You told me I was pretty I loved that.
You told me you missed me alot.
You told me you wanted to be with me.
You told me you cared for me but you lied.
You told me you never wanted to lose me but you lied.
You told me how pretty my eye's was.
You told me that I was something special.
You told me I had a nice butt but you lied.
You told me you needed me but you lied.
"So I guess everything you said was a lie."
A contest entry
- Dark and Exciting...take two by LostShadow.
320 points, ended May 5, 2007, 23 entries
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Dont I have a poem called "you told me"
this was good but what hoped it to you i have never read shit like this coming from you this was good tho keep up the good work
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This was very nice and also very sad. Thanks for entering and good luck.
Em
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nice butt? sadasasada
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sorry i am not laughing i forgot how to do the crying one.....wait
yasy
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Awwwwww!!!!Soooooo sad
But, I LOVED none the less!!!! Nicely done in get the emotional standpoint into veiw great job!!!!
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I like it alot very sad i know how you feel, well done and I will read more soon.
~Princess~
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This was good, you can see all the pain and feel you put into this.
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i like it you put your in it and i can see the pain and hurt that you are felling
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