Any moment now

Any moment now

time shall stop

the hands on the clock

will melt off

my heart shall stop

but only for a moment

my sight shall fade

and my heart shall guide me

Any moment now

the day will come

when time leaves

and Heaven falls

onto thee

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  • Blackwings
    April 29, 2007
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    AWWWWWWW! it's soooooo beautiful!!!!! I LOVED IT!!! sooooo well written Nicely done


  • k3nny silver member
    April 29, 2007

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    It was quite nice really... Although you might want to separate the phrases into parts... Anyway, it's good for your age... Good Luck in the contest and have fun!!!


  • bedovich
    April 29, 2007

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    niceeeeeeeeeeee

    thanks for entering i like it alotsssss short and str8 to the point good lucks