Two bodies melted into one1
The gentle sweet embrace2
Swaying to and fro3
Slow dancing under the dim lit moonlight4
The music only playing in their heads5
Two hearts made of priceless gold6
The riches they hold7
Heaven's stars gleam in their eyes 8
as they glare into the night9
Standing still they are presevered in time10
In the blink of an eye 11
the world stops turning12
Sharing the warmth 13
Each others arms wrapped in silence14
A single tear flows down15
her soft rosey cheek 16
As she closes her eyes17
she feels his hand brush18
her silky smooth face19
Gently wiping her tear away20
Fingers now running 21
through her soft shining hair22
His lips touch hers 23
Tongues massaging each other24
He slowly rests his head next to hers25
Whispering in her ear26
"I love you darling."27
Swaying to and fro28
they begin to slow dance29
once again30
to loves grace 31
making the world turn32
Author notes
Love makes the world turn.
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Voondabar!
Beautiful write Mary, absoulutly beautiful
leave it to you to write somehing so intriguing
briliant beyond words dear friend pure brilliance.
love u lots and keep up the great writes *hugs`
xoxoxoxoxoxo
~GanjaGoddess~ -
Very well written!!!
Thanx! This is so, so beautifull! It took me a long way down memory lane.....LOL!
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This was pretty good. Romantic, and flowing. Beautiful as the words flick over the readers mind making them dream of the love and the music. The world actually stopping in it's tracks... to await their word to continue.
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wow this was really romantic. thanks for sharing it was so great.
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WOW! You've left me completely speechless...this is beautiful and it could never ever ever ever get better! Amazing. Thank you so much for sharing. Beautiful write. May your years to come be filled with great writing such as this. God bless you, deadlyseductures.
~Steph~ -
This is so sweet and romantic. Dancing to the music in the mind...what a great thought.
Beautifully written
Victoria Lin
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Excellent
A nice picture of the timeless dance of the romance, two as one, together. The poem flows well and is well constructed.
Excellent work.
Georges -
EXCELLENT
Very, very nice........OK....:-)....very nice...........excellent choice of words, imagery, and adjectives.........good going........I really enjoyed your work......nice work, and God Bless You....................~~~~~~Kittyom~~~~~~ -
Thank you all for your kind comments. I appreciate them very much. It's good to know it kept you reading HiddenShadow. It was my intentions. Once again thank you. Lots of love, ~maryj~
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This is a very well written piece. It kept me reading, and is really sweet. Nice Write. ~amanda marie~
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EXCELLENT WORK , you did a great job here , describing and showing every emotions to a readers mind as the narrative of the poem goes by , great piece, congratulations you got my applause, MARY
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