Perfect View

I don't owe you anything. I could turn and walk away right now.. no I couldn't.

You and I both know why I am here, and why I can't leave. But what if everyone else knew?

I sit and admire you while you flutter in conversation, witty and full of intellect - you never cease to amaze.

Your flirtatious melody flows through the room and graces my fingers with its soft kiss.

My heart skips a beat.. I can feel my skin shaking.

I try to adjust my eyesight but its a magnetic attraction

A room full of people.. and all I see is you.

I get a glance.. and we share a second.. one.. and then its gone.

We sit across the room, saying thousands of words

None to each other.

Minutes fly by as the people mingle

You and I keep our posts

From this exact point in the entire room we have the perfect view.

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  • Blackwings
    April 29, 2007

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    AWWWWWWW!!!! So sweet!!!! I LOVED IT!!! I think that this isn soooo well written please keep writing Nicely done