Being Me

She was in love with me, and I with her. We knew we were right no matter what anyone said. I'd never been with a girl before. I was just a babydyke. It was time to do it. We both wanted it, badly. I made the first move. I pushed her against the wall, kissing her hard. She ripped my shirt off and gently pushed me to the floor, straddling me. Teasing my nipples with her tongue, she traced her way up my thigh with her fingertips, turning me on like I'd never felt before. Placing two fingers inside me, she began to bite my clit, softly, harder now, making me writhe in pleasure. Obviously, she knew what she was doing. I wanted her so badly. I wanted to feel her, to taste her, to let her know that she made me feel like the most beautiful girl in the world, but all I could think about right now was holding onto the sheets while spinning out of control. She made me feel alive for the first time. I was finally being me.1

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  • Edit The Sad Parts
    June 19, 2004
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    It would have been longer but I didn't have much time to write. Thanks for liking and reading it.

  • Irilis4u
    June 19, 2004
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    Awwww, this was a nice story. , I loved the last line, and the way you said you were a "babydyke" lol, creative, nice job.
    Irilis


  • June 15, 2004
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    nice but could be longer...more details next time

  • PlayLikeWeAreInLove
    June 15, 2004
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    well written/ awesome/ short

    i like this too...more erotic than the other one, but well written and it flows nicely, like the other one does. anyways, nice write again, byez!
    ~karinn -random person-