Remembering clear in my minds eye
That place where I loved to reside
The streets, they were bright and the litter was few
And the air, it was one of great pride
Clothes left hung out and doors left unlocked
You did at your own behest
Your mind was at ease and thoughts much at peace
no fear of an unwanted guest
Of course there was crime dire influence at work
some out on their own evil mission
But the papers back then had so few to report
That they printed a special edition
Religion was there in all different modes
To express it we could be direct
Racist & bigots unheard of back then
No need for politically correct
But these days the streets are littered with waste
And the evenings seem darker & long
the neighbours are distant caught up with their fears
No room for that old cheery song
And then as if that lots not enough
The weather it chose to join in
With freaky conditions all over the place
Could it be that we’re paying for our sin.
So lets take a look at the history so far
And the story that seems to unfold
We’ve taken a turn for the worse on the way
Not learning the new from the old
But there’s hope somewhere there in that great big divide
If only we stop the maraud
And work hard enough, we could then turn the tide
And get ourselves back to our God.
A contest entry
- poetry contest, the best poems you ever written by bedovich.
350 points, ended April 29, 2007, 24 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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awouga
another fine piece of art
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