My Old Maverick
W. Peter Sanci April 27 / 2007
When I was younger, much younger than today.
I had a nice yellow Ford Maverick, remember them.
Mine was special though, it was bright yellow.
But it had a black and white checkered vinyl roof.
It was one of a kind, believe me. Well that
yellow Maverick drove all over.
I even took it to my University with me . Well
One day my buddy Al and I went through this car
Wash, and we got stuck in the rinse cycle for
about 20 minutes.
Believe me it was kind of scary. Well we finally
got out of there. But the strangest thing happened,
Every time it rained the old thing stalled and my
Buddy Al had to get out and jiggle the carburetor
To
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Hummmm
To? To? To what? Me thinks you forgot to finish. This story has possibilities but the first sentence is incomplete; either that or you didn't mean to put in a period. Nice try and thanks for entering.
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Yayness!!! I LOVED IT!!!! Nicely done
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Great !
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