The Figure: Chapter Three

Your head whipped back and your whole body jerked backwards. A sharp pain shot through your whole body, and as you tried to scream you couldn't. You felt like your whole being was being pulled from all directions and you had no control.

It was that woman. It was her doing this to you. All this torture and memories that you never wanted to see again! She was bringing back all the pain that you had already experianced. Not again. Oh God not again! You could only take so much. The pain was increasing as the forever long pain seemed to never end. You had closed your eyes tight and were in a state of panic.

You then couldn't feel your body anymore. All the feeling was gone. Nothing. No pain. A bright blue light shinned on your face. You squinted and tried to look at the light. Your fear of it being that woman again scared you. But it wasn't her. It was someone else. A woman still but more radient than any other being you had ever seen. She looked at you; all of her features were alike to the woman before. The blue light and pale skin. It wasn' her though. Who was it?

The light dimmed a bit and your breathe stopped. She walked closer to you and held out her hand. You stared at the silky skin before you offering its love and compassion. You gently grabbed the hand and looked up at her. She pulled you up from the ground and looked into your eyes. You looked away still scarred from the previous experiance. She placed her delicate fingers on your rugged chin and positioned your face to look at hers again. You looked at her and her hands were both holding yours. The two of you just stared at one another for a long time.

"Do you wish to go now?" The woman uttured. You started to cry. She pulled you in closer and asked again, "Do you wish to go now?" Your eyes swelled up and your throat had a frog in it; you nodded your head slowly. She smiled and started walking away, pulling you with her.

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  • Mai4ever
    April 27, 2007
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    I didn't really get the meaning of this but your descriptions were good. I liked the beginning..really grabbed my attention. Are you going to continue with this? It's a good write but maybe in another part you could explain more of this. Other than that, nice job!


    • Rain-Shot-Rose
      May 2, 2007
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      Well...this is only my third chapter of The Figure. Have you read the chapters prior to this one? And yes I am planning to add more chapters onto it... I have just been really busy latey with everything. Everything will make sense in the end if you don't get it now.