It was those sweet cherry lips that drew me in from the start. They stood out from across the room, inviting, begging to be ravished. Begging me to be the one to taint them, corrupt them, and steal that innocence. Glances hooked, and I felt that thrill – that incensed passion that shot jolts of heat coursing through my entire being. I couldn’t tear my eyes off her, though I tried with all my might. There was some hidden beauty about you that just made me want to bring more of it out to the public eye, yet covet it for yourself at the same time. It was flirting with danger, yes, but it made it all the more exhilarating. With a simple nod, you gestured outside, and I whispered in my boyfriend’s ear that I’d be back within moments. I strode out, hips shaking slightly, knowing that your eyes would be glued to them. I heard footsteps following mine, but I didn’t dare turn around and see those searing eyes, flashing excitement and intrigue. I stepped outside of the dorm room into the pouring rain and deep gray sky, so humid it was bordering painful. Somehow, it seemed almost magical outside, unpredictable as the wild emotions flitting through my mind.1
The confident façade deteriorated the moment I turned around and you just stood there, shirt clinging tightly to voluptuous curves I wished I could rival, soaked, yet gorgeous all the same. I walked up to you hesitantly. This was the taboo, after all. But once you licked those blood red lips, I knew it was too late to turn back. All it took was a simple reach of my hand to draw your face close to mine. Your skin was so much softer than any boyfriend I had ever had, your body so much more lithe and gentle. Where men always seemed fumbling and rough, you were sweet. I lifted my eyes to meet yours one last time, and descended slowly on your mouth that had been torturing me all evening. You tasted of rain, summer, cherry lip gloss, and nerves… though I suppose I was just as nervous as you were… I was shaking, yet more afraid to turn back, to miss my opportunity. Our mouths moved together as one, tongues tangoing wildly all of a sudden, and I couldn’t help but shiver and arc my body into you as your hands ran sensuously up and down my spine, my chest, my thighs. Our fingers simultaneously intertwined, hands grasped together, and as we drew back from one another, gasping for breath, we shared a secret smile. 2
With a promise of friendship no matter what, we parted, you to run off to your dorms glowing, me to return to a boyfriend I loved, despite my enjoyment in our interlude. Every time I see you, I picture that run, showing off for me, no doubt: a look of absolute contentment, swaying hips, head held high, a slightly giggle and grin as you turned back to me… this was our little secret, and a damn good one at that. You smacked those cherry lips one more time, blowing a kiss flirtatiously that I caught with haste. I waited until you pranced off into the rain, savoring each moment, each stage of the kiss before I could realize that it was both our first and last. Somehow, that made it mean so much more, and I relived it while I could. You disappeared amidst the drops of rain and the deep gray sky, quietly letting me know you had no regrets. I never let you know: neither did I.3
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this summer, when I was 15 1/2... first kiss with another girl, and really what helped clue me in that I was bi... and I'm so glad I found the courage to kiss her
so... yeah, this is true. It makes me kinda wish that we could have gotten into an actual relationship... but at the time, it just couldn't have worked... but it makes going back to camp something I anticipate all year long 
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I loved this. Your description was fantastic. I could see every little detail in my mind as you went. It's awesome that you can share a story like this. Power to you. Definitely great writing here!
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I loved your descriptions of everything. The sky, the girl, emotions, mouths....Yes, all very nice.
I like the emotion you put into this. You really opened up and let people read something that was true, and that's hard to do.
Very good write.
Good luck in the contest.
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dont mind if i say so but that is really hot!lol this is a great story beats mine at least i think so. cherry lips is the best name for it too. people around here just dont think that being bi is a good thing but i dont see any reason to change i love this life.
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Joy -
Lovely Lovely! Reminded me a bit of my own experience.
"You disappeared amidst the drops of rain and the deep gray sky"
This line is beautiful, gives me a great image. Best of luck!
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WOW, this is an excellent write, I loved it. The background and coloring matched with the girls lips, and I loved your description of the emotions, and tastes. Dorm makes it sound like a college party. Which makes me think the girl is at least 18. Nice job here, had it been I in the narrators position, I would have been scared to do something like that I think lol. Great job!
Irilis -
awww....how sweet.....awsome story...i love it!!!i can just picture it happening....its so cute!great write....best of wishes...
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This was a beautiful, honest and tremendously exciting write. It was a pleasure to read and captivated you from the start to finish. First kisses, aren't they great. Such a wonderous experience. The repitious "cherry lips" truly made the piece. I'm glad you took the risk and had the pleasurable experience and chose to share it with us all.
Good luck in the contest
Victoria Lin
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what a beautiful piece of writing and an exciting, romantic, sexy and perfect moment in time... thanks for sharing that, I will keep it close. Nice.
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amazing
Christy
you're emotion really shines through in this piece. Very well expressed and well penned. Keep it up hunny and good luck in the contest
Janine
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