Confused

I know a girl

who is afraid,

afraid of loosing someone

someone who's close.

But how can she loose them

if she cant find herself?

I know a girl

who is tired of waiting

waiting for someone

someone to take her

take her far far away.

If she is to go

go far away

will she ever come back

come back to stay?

I know a girl

who has gone far away

but she will never come back

because she took herself away.

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  • Kat222
    April 27, 2007
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    duh! ok thanks


  • Brittneh
    April 27, 2007
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    I love it, made me sad... :-( Nice job!


  • greene
    April 27, 2007

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    wow!!! that was great!! i LOOOOOOOOOOVED it very much!!!! it was very deep!! and sad : ( but altogether ver good!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Your Anything
    April 27, 2007
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    very very good.


  • Kat222
    April 26, 2007
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    Nice

    what exactly is this about

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