Haiku

Haiku1

American style2

Seventeen syllable3

Description of natural things4

Poem5

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  • mommabug silver member
    June 14, 2004
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    good...liked this, and I working harder on my haiku, etc...I have been accused of talking too much, so I think it should be my new mantra...use less words, use less words...etc...mb


  • BillS2
    June 13, 2004
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    Well Done

    Hi Bill:
    I can relate to this Cinquain very well. I have a Tanka that is titled: Haiku and describes the Haiku, in a slightly different way. Well done. Bill


  • Gingerandhoney
    June 13, 2004
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    Excellent as usual, I loved this pun on a form using one to describe another version. Your cleverness knows no bounds. Good luck in the contest.

  • Culurien
    June 13, 2004
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    Aww that was to cute I loved it!

    -Amber

  • Ava Noire
    June 13, 2004
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    This made me smile too I love both forms! Thanks for making me smile, and for entering my contest.

  • Open Eyes
    June 13, 2004
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    LOL this made me smile... a cinquain about a haiku... i like it...

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