Escape...Love?

You sat next to me, I could not take it anymore.

I moved, you followed, why can't you leave me alone?

I moved again and again, it felt like a chore.

I switched places with my twin sister, my clone.

Now I sit, where my sister sit, waiting for the bell.

Finally it did, I walked out. I saw you there and so I fell.

You rushed to me, helped me up and said those words to me.

"I love you" and that moment we were meant to be.

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  • heartfullofvenom
    July 14, 2007

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    aw i loved it ...

    i have a contest up about love... you should enter this in it!!!!! its called " the deepest love" if your interested...

    i loved it!!!!!


  • Frozen Fire Poet
    May 15, 2007
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    This rocks

    This poem rocks I tell you! I like your writing!


  • bedovich
    April 25, 2007
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    great work

    well done i like the scene alots especailly the opening good lucks


  • Blackwings
    April 25, 2007
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    Awwww!!! That was sweet And cute Too!!! ><
    Nice job