Tyre-iron

Regret is ultimately rather useless. I do not hold that it is necessary in order to learn from one’s mistakes: all that is required for that is to objectively examine one’s actions and evaluate which were advantageous and which were not. This does not require any emotional interpretation. I move through the sitting room into the kitchen and very carefully scrub the blood and hair from my tyre-iron without removing my gloves. I can see Adrian’s foot protruding past the sofa. Blue socks with purple trousers. A grave error on his part – though not the reason that I killed him.

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"To be ashamed of one's immorality - that is a step on the ladder at the end of which one is ashamed of one's morality" - Friedrich Nietzsche

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  • Misaru-Mew
    May 9, 2007

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    Wow. This was great. I can tell you are very talented when it comes to writing. Either that or you just know what you are doing. xD


  • Drac
    May 9, 2007
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    Very good for such a short piece!
    Well done indeed! =)


  • Lostskins
    May 9, 2007
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    Interesting!

    i liked this, though short it said a lot which says a lot about your writing skills!

  • oneother
    May 2, 2007
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    Thats a pretty good start. For such a short piece, you did a good job describing it. I agree that regret is useless.


  • eyeambaldman
    April 26, 2007
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    Interesting...not a bad beginning. These 100-word stories are difficult.


  • sisterkatiefran
    April 25, 2007
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    hehe! that's why i would have killed him! i really liked the dark, twisted bit of humor at the end. excellent job with such a short bit of writting!

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